Lost Child. AHH! STOP IT! NO!

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Player11171305, Oct 31, 2013.

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  1. I HATE YOU!

    GET OUT OF MR HEAD!


    I DON'T WANT YOU HERE!


    STOP IT!

    MOMMY!

    MOOOMMMYYYY! :(

    Why don't you want me mommy... Why?











    I call that poem, "Lost Child."

    I hope you guys like it, it's close to my heart.
     
    #1 Player11171305, Oct 31, 2013
  2. ,_, My* not MR. Excuse my fail.
     
    #2 Player11171305, Oct 31, 2013
  3. Mr?
     
    #3 -CYP-_ICanMakeUrBodyLevitate-, Oct 31, 2013
  4. :cry:

    :cry:
     
    #4 Player11171305, Oct 31, 2013
  5. I couldn't feel the emotion.

    Nope didn't like,

    You could do much better.
     
    #5 PIMD_YOLO, Oct 31, 2013
  6. Even a kindergartener can make a masterpiece, keep working on it and one day thou may exceed that one dude who made Romeo and Juliet
     
    #6 PIMD_YOLO, Oct 31, 2013
  7. Hmmm
     
    #7 ---V_F4NT4STIC---, Oct 31, 2013
  8. Shakespeare yeah that's the name I forgot  one day you may transcend him,
     
    #8 PIMD_YOLO, Oct 31, 2013
  9. hm... it reminds me of a film
     
    #9 I_AM_ZOMBIE_PRINCESS_MEGAN, Oct 31, 2013
  10. ?Brit
     
    #10 That_Witch_BunBun, Oct 31, 2013
  11. I'm much better than Shakespeare :(
     
    #11 Player11171305, Oct 31, 2013
  12. The poem is almost as stupid as OP ?
     
    #12 -_A_-Pickle, Oct 31, 2013
  13. Thank you.  I did pour my heart and soul into this!
     
    #13 Player11171305, Oct 31, 2013
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    #14 Deadly_VampChick, Oct 31, 2013
  15. Oh God, I want to cry now. I understand the poem. *sob*
     
    #15 PIMD_Queen_of_Recharging, Nov 1, 2013
  16. Yo when you think about this it's mad deep.
     
    #16 *-AD_iMrsPoz_RunWithTheWolves (01), Nov 1, 2013
  17. Though I'm sure OP may not have intended it to be
     
    #17 *-AD_iMrsPoz_RunWithTheWolves (01), Nov 1, 2013
  18. She runs with me
     
    #18 -T_L-Emoji, Nov 1, 2013
  19. oh boy..
     
    #19 Panakins, Nov 1, 2013
  20.  I understand it,
    But..
    I don't think that will class as a poem..
    Just yet.
     
    #20 Silenced-Cearon, Nov 1, 2013
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