Lost at the sea

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Hill_, May 26, 2011.

  1. I was working out with my pal Dittle at the Gym w8ting for the cruise to get to the dock.we have been planing our summer vacation all year, we where going to spend a summer at a cruise and look for some hot chicks. "it's gonna be the best summer vacation ever" Dittle said "I know, let's go the cruise is getting here soon" I said "ok" he replied. As soon as we got inside if the cruise we saw two girls looking around Dittle got close as soon as he say the girls "Hey ladies" he said "please don't ruin it this time" I texted him so he could read it before he blew our moment with the girls "sooo. What's your name?" Dittle asked "I'm jodiie" she said smiling "nice smile u got there" Dittle said "oh boy" I said while going to grab some drinks " and who are you?" Dittle asked to the other girl. "I'm Luka and we are waiting for our friend Danzo" "hmm danzo? sounds familiar" I said while walking in and bringing the drinks "is he a good hacker?" I aked "yea he is kinda geeky" Luka replied "yup I know him he was a pal in hacker school (it was a secret school)" I said "cool" Dittle said "Hey guys" Danzo said while waving us from the other side of the cruise.
     
  2. Great! Just work in separating the dialogue a little bit for a smoother read
     
  3. Oooh, sounds interesting.
     
  4. Haha I like how he made me a flirt XD
     
  5. Yo we go to secret school
     
  6. It's for hackers 
     
  7. Add me in this pls
     
  8. Sorry spots are full
     
  9. We joined up with Danzo and Qin next to the pool. we all decided to devide into groups the boys in one room and the girls in the other group but as soon as we all devided everything went black...

    I was at te middle at the sea and I only saw danzo so I swam close and tried to wake him up as soon as he woke up I told him that we had to look for the others. "it's time for our hacker and survivalence classes to be tested" Danzo said
    "yea let's go" I said while I swam looking for the others. Danzo found Dittle, he was with Qin and Luka.

    I saw Jodiee she was unconscious I swam close to her and took her by my shoulder Danzo,Dittle and the others went to an island.

    "what the heck happened" Dittle said
    "i don't know but it wasnt on the Brosure" Danzo said
    We all gathered and devided our duties... Suddenly Danzo ran and and shouted "I told You!!"
    I ran to him and asked "what happened?"
    "remember my idea of waterproof computers that can float?"
    "yea" i replied
    "well it wasn't a bad idea after all" he said while taking our computers out of the water
    "dude your a genius! now we only have to hack the satellites and get some enternet so we can get help!" I said.
    Dittle came by and told us what we had to do on our island "Hill and danzo hack the... Thingy.. Whatever your doing! Qin and Luka will look for fruits and food while me and Jodie do some weapons and armor"

    "perfect" Jodie said
     
  10. High 5 hill!!
     
  11. We are awesome!! 
     
  12.  fuck yeah I'm a leader 
     
  13. We get to make the weapons and armour 
    That's awesome 
     
  14. If i were in that... It wuld be the best story ever... XD...
     
  15. I'll make more l8ter I need some time so I can think and work with my scratch XD
     
  16. I know right Jodie!! Sahwweeeeeet
     
  17. This is really good so far keep it up! ;)
     
  18. When every one did what they had to do we all met at the camp ground, there they all watched Me and Danzo do our Job at the computer while they eat fruits.
    "ah I'm tired" Qin said
    "me too" Jodie replied
    "yes we hacked into the satelite" I said "now we only have to contact the servers for some Internet" Danzo said
    "And... Done!" he said
    "The only thing that's left is contact the C.I.A. But what if we run out of battery?" I asked
    "don't fear solar powered battery is here" Danzo said while connecting a solar panel on the USB of the computer. "Now let's get some sleep it's gonna be a long week.." I said

    The other day Dittle woke up and woke everyone up too. "ugh come on Dittle let me have some more sleep" said luka "but we need food" Dittle said "ugh ok" luka said while waking up Qin.

    "It's gonna b a tough day" I said while turning my computer on.
    Meanwhile Dittle was doing armor with jodie...
    "so how are you?" Dittle asked
    "I'm fine... As you can see I'm doing some weapons" she replied
    "wow she's not easy -.-'" Danzo said to his self.
    "what did you say?" Jodie asked
    "uh? Oh nothing" Dittle replied
    Dittle heard Danzo saying "DARN!" as soon as jodie asked to Dittle "what do you think that happened?" I yelled "THEY SHUTTED DOWN THE SERVER, ugh we have to look for another server..."

    It was night time and as usual the were eating and looking at Danzo and me working with the computer when suddenly Dittle said "I'll have to look around the island to see what's around us." "don't its dark why don't you do it in the morning" Jodie asked
    "because I'm not gonna let you making weapons alone tomorrow in the morning" Dittle said while leaving the camp ground.