Look Mama (I've Come So Far)

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by 4NIC8, Apr 19, 2018.

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  1. Look mama I've come so far...
    From eating PB&J to caviar...
    From rubber bands to an Audamar...
    From an old bucket to a new car...
    You said the sky was the limit,
    Now your son is a superstar.
    My refrigerator is a mini bar.
    You can tell where my thoughts are.
    Somewhere up in the clouds,
    Much higher than cloud nine.
    Aye mama I'm doing pretty fine,
    And to me the fans are so kind.
    They tell me that I'm one of a kind.
    I didn't care if I ever got signed,
    It's the way that I'm designed.
    I got tunnel vision in my mind.
    Since I got dough hoes don't mind,
    If I'm the rudest nigga around.
    You were here through thick and thin,
    No matter if I would lose or win.
    My number one fan since the womb.
    You have that spot till I'm in the tomb.
    You had my back when I was wrong.
    It's about that time I made you a song.
    I can never repay you for anything,
    So let me know if you ever need anything.
     
    #1 4NIC8, Apr 19, 2018
  2. This is fictional. Just a heads up
     
    #2 4NIC8, Apr 19, 2018
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    #3 __TheTitanGirl__, Apr 19, 2018
  4. It's nice, I like
    But tbh I'd prefer PB&J over caviar anyday ☹
     
    #4 YourInactiveTeddyBear, Apr 19, 2018
  5. i really like it, just one comment:
    the repetition of kind seems a tad awkward to me.
     
    #5 Muschi, Apr 19, 2018
  6. Be my ghostwriter
     
    #6 Baki, Apr 19, 2018
  7. You should show this to your mom. I dig the overall realness of what you’re saying.
     
    #7 -_I_-4m-G0IN6-7o-CHILL-y0U-__-, Apr 19, 2018
  8. It's fictional. I'm not into Audamars
     
    #8 ChocolateThunder, Apr 20, 2018
  9. I’m talkin about the love for your mom and wanting to make her proud part... and that’s about it.
     
    #9 -_I_-4m-G0IN6-7o-CHILL-y0U-__-, Apr 20, 2018
  10. Oh, that part isn't fictional.
     
    #10 ChocolateThunder, Apr 20, 2018
  11. idiot
     
    #11 -Just_A_Noob-2, Apr 20, 2018
  12. Not bad
     
    #12 Trent, Apr 20, 2018
  13. Reported
     
    #13 4NIC8, Apr 21, 2018
  14. Not bad
     
    #14 KUROKO29, Apr 21, 2018
  15. For what tho 
     
    #15 -iLyssaTheGummyBearKissa-, Apr 21, 2018
  16. No clue. ^
     
    #16 HungryHypocrite, Apr 21, 2018
  17. Nice one  try to fulfil all her needs while she’s still here
     
    #17 Lui, Apr 21, 2018
  18. Harrassment and spamming. Both against ToC and RoC.
     
    #18 4NIC8, Apr 21, 2018
  19. Sounds legit. Keep writing.
     
    #19 MoisellecoolBaby, Apr 21, 2018
  20. for making him butthurt
     
    #20 -Just_A_Noob-2, Apr 21, 2018
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