Give me feedback please! It was a usual day, My teacher Mr Blackmore was shouting, my sister snogging my best friend, the class bully was scaring two students and my girl friend was talking to her friend. Like I said a typical day. My girl friends name was Hannah she was kind, cool and popular, then there's my sister lily she's only just came off of being tagged, she's dating my best friend Tom who is easy going but can't stop snogging my sister! Then there's the class bully Kira and her favourite victims Kenzie and Linda, I'm friendly with the three of them but still I keep my distance. Anyway, Mr B was draining on about how important our history exam is! Till some thing unusual happened a rock came thruw the window and shattered the glass, my sister screamed and we all jumped on the floor. The rock landed on a table it had a note on it, Mr B read the note. He stared at it for a bit before saying "class dismissed" he left the note on the table and walked out. We all got up distressed, I looked at Hannah "are you alright?" She replied "yeah, what was that About?" I looked around "no idea" We walked out of the room. Kira had already ran off after Linda and Kenzie. Tom walked out after us and asked "have you seen lily?" Lily jumped on top of toms back "I'm here and I picked some thing up" she smiled and waved the not in front of us...
We walked to the park, anxious of what the note said. Lily said "shall I read it?" "sure!" I replied! "It says Dear Mr Blackmore Every things in place, ready and waiting for you to make your move! Signed Mr Cornish. Probably nothing important" exclaimed lily. I looked at Hannah, and thought what could it mean..