(This story is based on true events...except for the ending) Last year 3:40 PM I'm sitting in piano class when all of a sudden, SHE walked in. She was beautiful; her strawberry blonde hair flowing as she walked through the door. She walked up to the teacher to tell her that she was being switched into our class. This is where the nightmare begins... 1 week later We got to know each other better, her name was Laura. I had very deep feelings for her...a feeling stronger than I've ever felt for anyone else; love. My mind was filled with memories from the week; us walking down the hallway together, us telling secrets to each other, etc. It was her birthday that week and she invited me to come! I was extremely overjoyed. That saturday, I had arrived at her house. It was that day that I found out she had a boyfriend...which made me sad but, he was obviously a meth head so the relationship wouldn't last long. 1 month later Everyday when I'd get home from school, I would call Laura; not noticing that I had been talking to only her and none of my other friends for the past month. By this time, we've already had a few fights, which still somewhat haunt me to this day. She wasn't who I thought she was...she would ignore me and make perverted comments towards my friends KNOWING my feelings for her...my hate started to grow. 2 months later I've had it with her...I can't stand to even be around her. By this time she's put me through depression, hate, and mediocracy. I can honestly say, I hate her. Present day One year has past...now everything she does kills me just a little bit more on the inside...they gave us metal forks at lunch today instead of plastic ones. Laura decided to approach me today...she said "David...do you still love me?" I responded, "Well Laura...there may be a little piece of me that still does but, I can't seem to find it." Her response? "Well you need to find it and get over me!" I snapped. I plunged that fork straight through her throat. I then looked around the room and laughed...
ummmmmmm...well that's quite lovely. Actually the story itself is set up nicely. You put what you wanted and left it at that. Well done David. I mean besides the fact that it's gory. Yeah. Besides that.