Last Chance

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Opalia, Jan 21, 2012.

  1. (Ok so I'm not good at writing stories so I'm sorry if this sucks...and if I start saying random stuff it's cuz I ran out of ideas)

    They walked through the forest without a sound. She walked with confidence and had no emotion shown on her face. He walked quietly and with determination but looked slightly nervous. They had one destination in mind: A cave that lead to the ruins of city that supposedly had millions of dollars worth of gold in it. Their plan: Get through the cave, find the gold, get out alive, and get paid for the gold. Both knew that there was a chance of danger but if they found this "city" their clients would pay well.

    "Hurry up Austin..." the girl muttered "I'm going as fast as I can...Hey Ellie how much longer do we have to walk?" Austin asked and tried to catch up to Ellie. "Stop whining there's at least two hours until sundown so that's how long we are going to walk!" Ellie yelled at him and received a glare in response.

    They continued hiking until the sun went down and they were forced to make camp. "So...Why didn't our clients just go to the cave themselves?" Austin asked sitting by the small fire that they had made "Well...It's because of a legend of the cave having a curse or some crap like that..." said Ellie as she set up the tents "Wait what curse?" Ellie sighed "Well about twelve years ago a group of explorers went into the cave looking for the city and....."
     
  2. 2 more bumps and I'll update