*this is not a true it is pure fiction. Please enjoy!It starts in a bedroom* Of course I'm grounded again! I hate it here! I get up and walk over to my laptop and opened it up. Logged on to my facepic account. Oh look my best friend is on already. "hey" I said "hey" Kayla said "what did you do in Nelsons class" "An essay about the paper we've been working on" UPDATE:Brandon has logged on to your chat "PM me" Then a box appears on my laptop "Do you know who Brandon is?" I said "No I thought you knew him" Kayla said " Well we'll never meet him In real life" "Ok we'll
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