Kidnapped- Opalia's rp turned into a story.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by PhiaD-D-Doll, Dec 23, 2011.

  1. So, I took the characters and I'm sorry that I went ahead and ****ed a few of the personalities up, but you people forgot that you've been kidnapped for years- where's your strength coming from? So I demented the fuck outta a few characters, but I will keep most traits.


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    "Let me go! Fuck you! Asshole!" I screeched meaninglessly at my captor, who had picked me up and thrown me over his shoulder.
    I was camping with my friends, and we had been drinking all night, but some stranger picking me up was enough to make me sober.
    "shut up, sweetheart. You'll feel better in a bit!" he was disgusting- balding and missing some teeth.
    He threw me into the bed of his truck and closed the top of it.
    Who the hell has a metal cover for the back of their truck?
    I pounded against it, but he had locked it from the outside.
    I curled up in a ball in the corner of the truck, too scared to go to sleep.

    "ha! Look at her! She's not even pretty!" someone screamed. There was lots of laughter following that insult. Who were they talking about?
    I sat up and tried to rub my eyes.
    Where the hell was I? I had a massive headache, but it didn't feel like a hangover.
    What had happened?
    Why was I in shackles?
    I started hyperventilating.
    "look at the poor thing, all riled up! What a sorry excuse for a kidnapee!" the same voice giggled.
    I looked around.
    Cages everywhere.
    Most filled with people, a few girls and a guy.
    The one closet to me was smirking, her teeth disgusting. "you gonna cry?" she sneered, and the people laughed.
    "what the hell is this?"
    "hell." the girl threw her head back and laughed evilly.
    "don't mind her, she's insane." the guy smiled, his teeth also gross.
    "how long have you been here?" I whispered.
    "I can't even remember. A long time, though. He tells me I'm seventeen." he blushed a bit. "the laughing one is Gayle, the girl with black hair is Opal, blondy is Bridget, long hair is Azalea, the one with green hair is Dolph, and the strawberry blonde is Miranda. I'm K."
    "who's he? And I caught almost nothing of what you said." I laughed.
    There was a crash upstairs. "BITCH!!!" someone shouted, and then there was screaming.
    "Fuck this!" a woman shouted and a door slammed.
    "he's coming~" Gayle (I think) said and she started laughing again.
    A burly looking man with broad shoulders and no hair stormed downstairs.
    He was looking around the cages angrily, and the other girls and K tried to hide.
    I, like an idiot, didn't shrink back. I look at them, then up at the now smiling man. "I forgot I caught a new one. No scars on ya, either." he sounded excited.
    He unlocked the cage and came inside.
    Gayle started laughing. "London Bridge is falling down, falling down, falling down, London bridge is falling down, MY FAIR LADY!!" she screamed and giggled.
    The man picked me up by my hair and threw me out of the cage and onto the floor. He kicked my head, and, thank god, I blacked out.
     
  2. Wonderful!
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  3. Thank you 
     
  4. good job
     
  5. Thank you 

    There shall be more later~
     
  6. I'm fapping amazed Phia! 
     
  7. Amazing! More 
     
  8. Cool... Very cool... I like that K is the guy that immediately introduces all the characters. 
     
  9. Amazing!! good job. Bump!!
     
  10. He's used to it, he's been there for ages xD
     
  11. You forgot Bidam...
     
  12. (please say that the characters all don't know my name )
     
  13. Yup. Almost his whole life.
     
  14. I didn't forget him 
     
  15. And Kira what the hell dude you missed alot of characters
     
  16. Geez, calm your tits.
    There's been one chapter 
     
  17. What she said.  nothing more.
     
  18. THIS STORY SHALL NOT FALL