Right, I'm new to writing stories on this but I have been writing them all my life! That doesn't mean they're good though!!!!! I have a pretty good idea of what I'm gonna write and I promise I'll start tomorrow!!!
Why'd you haft to go and make things so complicated!? Sorry, first thing that popped into my head. I'll check it out.
Haha lol I've been around for a few months but I haven't written anything yet..... so I've decided to start!
Emily's POV My aunt, uncle and cousin were coming over to stay with my family for summer today. The last time I had seen my cousin, Kai, was when we were 9. Mum had invited them over to stay with us during the summer break because she wanted someone to attend the parties she went to, other than her and Dad. Mum and Dad were often out of the house. I had learnt that if I wanted something done, I had to do it myself. ~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~• Sorry, that's all I could update for now, but I promise I'll write more later
It's interesting. But the transition from "my family coming over for the summer" to "I haven't seen my cousin in a while" was just odd to me. Again, you had sentences that were just thrown in there and it was kind of confusing to me at first what the story was about. I still don't understand the story but sounds interesting keep writing!!!
Emily's POV I had decided on a purple t-shirt, skinny jeans, purple pumps and let my long, straight brown hair lie loose. Dad had went to the airport to collect my aunt, uncle and Kai and Mum was frantically tidying the house before they arrived. "Emily!" Mum called "Would you show Kai to his room when he arrives, please?" "Okay, Mum" I shouted back. I heard the key turn and the door being pushed open. Then I heard Dad saying "...so welcome to our humble abode..." and then Mum started talking. I went down to the hall and was met with my aunt, uncle and.. Wow! Who's he? That isn't Kai!!
I'm sorry guys, I'm gonna stick to reading stories, rather than writing them. Plus, I don't have the time