INSANITY

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 21, 2015.

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  1. Your devil and its' demons, your angels and their lords,
    There is no war as brutal than one fought without swords.
    Internal and invisible, raging from within,
    and when you're battling yourself, can you really ever win?
    Arguing with silence that echoes and booms,
    Fighting with a darkness that creeps, and consumes.
    Racing thoughts becoming fiercely intertwined,
    One soldier. One enemy. One weapon. One mind.
    Does sanity drift away, or suddenly slip?
    I wonder if you could feel yourself losing your grip.
    There is no war as brutal than one fought without swords,
    Your devil and its demons, your angels and their lords.
     
    #1 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 21, 2015
  2. Good job!


    The number of your audience doesn't matter,
    Keep it up.
     
    #2 Xenogenesis, Mar 21, 2015
  3. I just wish I could write like this on cue and not just when I'm in a messed up mindset
     
    #3 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 21, 2015
  4. wow really nice  you got a talent
     
    #4 -BOSEN-, Mar 21, 2015
  5. Thank you guys for the positive feedback 
     
    #5 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 21, 2015
  6. Hmmmm.... Interesting. I thought this was about the insanity workout.

    But this is actually pretty good. Good job
     
    #6 ltachi, Mar 21, 2015
  7. Thank you glad you enjoyed it
     
    #7 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 21, 2015
  8. I thought this was going to be a review about the Insanity Workout System :lol:

    Oh how was I fooled.

    Great Job :D
     
    #8 Tempting, Mar 21, 2015
  9. Lol didn't mean to fool anyone
     
    #9 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 21, 2015
  10. Absolutely, this is an awesome poem. great, great, great work! and even though you say you wish you could do it when you're not in such a messed up state of mind, I'm sure you can. just keep trying and keep it up 
     
    #10 _FallenAngel, Mar 21, 2015
  11. I try my best trust me but nothing ever works out
     
    #11 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 21, 2015
  12. I'm sure many people with mental disabilities or have been through hard times can relate to this poem. I thank you all for the positive feedback as well.
     
    #12 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 22, 2015
  13. Did you copy and paste this?
     
    #13 MrLoneIy, Mar 22, 2015
  14. For a second i thought this was lyrics to Amon Amarth xD LMFAO... That band sucks .-.
     
    #14 Kronos_xFinite, Mar 22, 2015
  15. I thought this was going to be a vocaloid song. But good job!
     
    #15 lurk5, Mar 22, 2015
  16. No I did not it was written a while back thought I'd share.
     
    #16 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 22, 2015
  17. Liked it :) have you heard this song named lose control by eminem?
     
    #17 Fanah, Mar 23, 2015
  18. ?
     
    #18 ForeverNoob, Mar 23, 2015
  19. No but I did look it up, the only thing I found was lose yourself. Was that the song you meant?
     
    #19 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 23, 2015
  20. ???Loli ????
     
    #20 -UN-Korrupt_Savage, Mar 23, 2015
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