In Danger

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *MyNameisShirley (01), Nov 24, 2011.

  1. "Hello?"
    "Do you love me?"
    "Melissa?"
    "Answer my question, Jake, do you love me?"
    "Melissa, I.... I... I don't."
    "Truly?"
    "Truly."
    The line went dead.
    "Yo, Jake, who was that?" asked Jake's girlfriend, Alice.
    " It was Melissa," he said quietly.
    "Melissa?! What she say?" she asked, surprised.
    "She asked me if I love her, and when I said no, she hung up."
    Their eyes met. Melissa Black was the daughter of Peter Black, who murdered a woman two years ago and was still in jail. Just this summer, Melissa and her mom moved to Goodville, and having heard of her dad, Jake tried to be nice to her. She then considered Jake as her best friend and would "hog" him away, even from Alice. Rumors spread that she liked Jake, which kind of makes sense since she was being mean to Alice.
    "I'm sure she'll be fine." Alice said.
    "I hope so," Jake replied.
    They looked at each other for a moment, then started laughing. The two of them were about to kiss when Jake's phone rang.
    "Hello?"
    "Jake, did you hear?"
    It was Jake's friend, Brian.
    "About what?" he asked.
    "Melissa, you know?"
    "What about her?" asked Jake.
    "You seriously don't know?" Brian asked.
    "No, what happened?"
    " Well, Melissa died two minutes ago, her mom found her in the bathtub drenched in her own blood and-- hello? Jake? Are you with me? Jake?"
    But Jake wasn't listening he was petrified. He dropped his phone, which, luckily hit the rug. Astonished, Jake laid still on his bed.
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    Tell me if u like it!
    And BTW, for readers who have read The Guy and Forever and Always, I have decided to drop it. U can make it a RP if u want. :)
     
  2. But you'll continue this right??? BUMP!
     
  3. I'll continue mines. :lol:  CHCK mines,high school of the haunted house.and thnx!
     
  4. Yes, TheAndi, I will
     
  5. Here we go...
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    "Jake? What happened?" asked Alice
    Jake didn't answer.
    Alice picked up his phone. Brian was still saying hello.
    "Hello? ... Brian?... Yes, this is Alice. .. Um, he's just lying on his bed..... Yeah, he looks shocked.. Why? I don't know why... you know why?... Why?..... WHAT! ... No joke! No... No... No...". Then Alice too dropped the phone. Alice looked at Jake. Their eyes met.
    "She called me 10 minutes before her death." he said, quietly.
    "Jake, I --"
    " She's dead. Because of me."
    "It's not your fault, Jake."
    "Alice, it is too my fault. She liked me. 10 minutes ago, she asked me if I loved her. I made her upset, I made her die!"
    Alice watched her boyfriend. He was all messed up. He wasn't the Jake as she knew him, who had cute brown hair, dark blue eyes and a confident smile. He was now a boy with messy brown hair, eyes that now looked so depressed and his smile was no longer confident, it was all twisted up and sour. Just as Alice was about to say more comforting words, someone knocked on his door. It was Jake's mom. "Jake, the police wants to see you. It's about Melissa. She died, you know." Although Jake's mom's voice was strong, you could see the worry in her eyes.
    "I'll be right down." said Jake. His mom nodded and closed the door.
    Jake and Alice's eyes met for about the tenth time today. Without a word, they went downstairs where the police were.
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  6. Bumo bumo bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump bump!!
     
  7. Anybody?
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