Immortals (chapter 2)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SnowLily (01), Jul 2, 2012.

  1. -Two- The real stuff
    do not tell me about proof reading. Ik I was in a rush! Thanks for reading.!!

    "Hey Silent, how much do you like my brother?" asked my best friend, Dawn

    "Well crap..." I hissed

    "What? Good God, I was just asking. Jeez get off the cotton horse, Silent," Dawn said with a huff.

    "No, look!" I said, pointing to some smoke in the distance. "Smoke!"

    "So? It's probably just someone burning leaves. Now get your panties out of a bunch." Dawn said with one of her ever famous sighs and eye rolls.

    "Dawn!" I gasped. "No one just burns leaves! Not with how easily it can spread!" I shouted, causing people to stop and look at what I was still pointing at like a fool.

    "Help! The farm!! It caught fire!!" shouted a very burnt man, limping down the street.

    "Bloody—" Dawn stopped, realizing something. "Silent! Our brothers are in there!" Screeched Dawn, grabbing my arm and running towards the farm.

    "Yeah! You think I don't know that!" I shouted looking up at the cloud of billowing smoke.

    Once we as close as we could to the farm— the heat was really hot, okay?— Dawn dropped my arm and started screaming Felix's name.

    "Felix! Felix?!" Dawn shrieked.

    "Dawn? Dawn! Help me! It's going to burn a hole right trough me! HELP ME! DAWN!" Felix Scream in agony from inside the scorching flames.

    "Luca! Luca?!" I shouted.

    "Silent, I'm okay. I'm right here." Luca said, grabbing my shoulder and pulling me into a big hug.

    "Luca! Oh god… Where's Bram? He wasn't with you!?" I sobbed into Luca's shoulder.

    Luca held me tight— being the protective brother he is — and stroked my hair, trying to calm me down. "No, but he's fine. He's helping the doctors with the injured people. Just calm down. Shhhh..."

    "Are you hurt?" I managed to choke out.

    "Silent. I'm fine." Said Luca, giving me one of his stern looks.

    "SILENT!!!!!" I heard dawn shout from inside the burning barn, causing me to jerk away from Luca. "Help! Help us!!"

    I ran towards the barn not aware of the smell of gas and all the people telling me to stop. I should have stopped. I was going to when Bram, Luca, and Felix shouted no all at once.

    And then the next thing I know Is I'm soaring through the air, landing on the dusty, brick road, screaming, then just going limp. I could see everything. But it wasn't In my bodies point of view. I was floating! But I was transparent. 'why am I transparent?' I thought, but then I felt a pulling and shaking feeling. Like some one was picking me up and shaking me.

    Maybe that's because I was back in my body and Luca was screaming at me. I could see it. I could hear it and feel it. I wanted to tell Luca to hush. That I'm fine. But I couldn't.

    "Silent...!" Luca sobbed in a heart wrenching scream. " Don't you dare leave me, Silent! Stay with me! Please!"

    All I could manage was a cough that made blood spill from the wound that I hadn't notice had claimed my chest as it's own. It was a big, ugly wound. But it was already starting to close.

    "That's weird." I thought I said. But really it sounded more like "Hags herd."

    "Son, we need to care for her. Will you please let her go?" Asked a periodic that I recognized as Jack Hines.

    Luca hesitated before handing me over in a very painful manner, but just before he did, he whispered four little words.

    "I love you, Silent"


    TO BE CONTINUED!!!
     
  2. Paramedic* lol not periodic
     
  3. Paramedic* lol not periodic
     
  4. Ignore the repost!