I'm lost

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -AOC-ImHavingABadBadDay-, Jun 22, 2012.

  1. How did we get here?
    A world so distant.
    I wish you were here.
    I'd change it in an instant.

    It was all thrown away,
    with my heart broke issues.
    In the end you didn't stay,
    Hearts love is not for misuse.

    I'll keep the memories always.
    The treasured moments never end.
    Through all the big and small days,
    I try; sometimes I just pretend.

    And so I'm writing this.
    four years! I've paid the cost.
    Loves sweet and tender kiss,
    is gone and so I'm lost.
     
  2. <33 nice. 
     
  3. Thats good is it your own work?
     
  4. Adam! This is AMAZING!
     
  5. Ya I wrote it myself
     
  6. I'm going to make this a very slow and sad song for my singing practice if you don't mind... I won't record it or anything... Just for me... Ha
     
  7. I want to sing this so damn bad! Make it into hit song give you a million buck if you promise not to misuse it.
     
  8. No! No! Because any hit song is always fast paced, and popish... You should make it slow, and beautiful...
     
  9. Not the hit songs i like! Lol i love the slow ones
     
  10. Slow, beautiful songs make me want to hold someone close... Makes me mad that I can't!!! Ha
     
  11. Do you need a hug? <(^,..,^<)
     
  12. I do need a hug! Haha
     
  13.  that's do cute.
     
  14.  must I say, brilliant work, a masterpiece.
     
  15. Well thank you! I actually write a lot of peoms and short stories.