I wrote an amazing poem 

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by *_NicoleTheShortie_ (01), Jun 3, 2011.

  1. Yup sure did . 
     
  2. Lol Where is it
     
  3. I cry for you, I cry right now
    I wonder why, I wonder how
    You've hurt my feelings
    You've broke my heart
    I hate it when we're always apart.

    I love you, but do you love me?
    Is our love fake or meant to be?
    We hug, we hold hands, but that's all we can do, I wish I can do more, but that's all up to you.

    Why can't you trust or believe in me? You think I cheat, is that what you see?

    I would never hurt or break up with you, at least that's what I think, do you think that way too?

    When I'm with you I'm as happy as can be, I think about you all night, do you think about me?

    I think you're funny and also very strong, some times I feel like nothing can go wrong.

    Do you even know my feelings for you? I wish I can express my love that's been true.

    I'll never forget the time we've spend, some times I wish that it'll never end.

    Just give me a hug or even a kiss, I hope it's something that I'll never ever miss.

    Forget what people say or might even do, you should always remember that I'll always love you!!
     
  4.  yup i gots talent . I wrote another one about tacos too 
     
  5. Thats Good.Ooh tacos
     
  6. I WANNA HEAR THE TACO ONE!!!
     
  7. That is very inspiring I can relate 2 it. You did very good. I wish I could write like that!
     
  8. Heh thanks .  I cant find the taco one 
     
  9. Mine are all dark nd kinda depressing
     
  10. Its beautiful I can totally relate. Your super talented.
     
  11. I like it! 
     
  12. I made a poem too!
     
  13. I like it :ugeek:
     
  14. Me wanna hear jack ! And thanks guys. 
     
  15. It's kinda short but still amazing

    Here goes:
    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    Some poems rhymes
    This one doesn't
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  16.  lol. The OP's poem was great. Nice work.
     
  17. Beautiful
    It made me cry cause it's awesomeness
     
  18. I made one....

    Together

    Knees to my chest
    Someone comes up and picks me up
    I look at them they smile
    'You okay?'
    'Yea'
    We walk together while the rain pours down
    We see lightning and hear thunder but it doesn't matter
    As long as we have each other....