(You can also pm me) Alright so as a few of you already know (mostly people in Leakers) I'm tryna make my first song. I got the beat and all. Love the damn beat. (It's a different beat than the one I gave as a preview to some of you) But.... I'm stuck. STUCK! I need a damn HOOK/CHORUS! I need ideas on something catchy! I've been doing some reading on tips and stuff on how to make a catchy hook cuz most of the times the hook is what draws us in to the music right? Well it does to me. Right so people have been saying 16 bar hooks are like the most catchy as opposed to like 8 or 18 bar hooks and stuff but idk all that music shit! I'm not asking for the words. Just help in anyway! I can even send you a preview of the hook part of the beat if you want. I would just need to make the video. But this is like the most vital part of the song. The lyrics can come real easily so I'm not bothered about them. In fact I alrdy have a few ideas that came to mind written down and will incorporate it in the verses later. But please help! Also looking to like, change the pitches obviously. Cant 'sing' the most attractive part of the song (hook) as if I was reading a book. Right? No. That just ruins it. I'm not really familiar with the notes so none of the "oh just use a low B and G" and stuff like that. Just ideas on what to do to make it REALLY catchy! (Although I'm open to "YouTube'ing" the pitches in notes) If you cant help then plz dont comment. If this doesnt get responses that help in any way within like, 48 hrs or something, I ask that this gets deleted plz. So yeah. Respond here or pm me please! Wish me luck! Deuces! ..\\
I could try to sing?)) i'm in the ranks of Susan Boyle, Paul Potts, and Luciano Pavarotti. XDD seriously
My voice has been blessed by the muses of the gods. It is so fucking powerful and inspiring, that all who hear lose their sense of hearing from the amazingness that is my goddamn singing, and all the glass panels fortunate enough to witness the awe-awakening song break and tremble and quake in swift gasms. I am the singing god. It is me. I am the muse. All shall rejoice and bow down in respect to moi. (( no seriously I cannot sing for shit, but I've got some experience with musical instruments and as a writer I can help you out with the lyrics, maybe. :0 ))
yo, these lyrics come from my heart (heart) It's what I call my art (art) These words will tear you apart (apart) does that work?
So, are you asking for help with writing lyrics? Also, I'm pretty sure the hook and the chorus aren't the same, but I could be wrong. You said you have the instrumentals ("the beat") and also that you can probably write the lyrics yourself. I'd definitely be willing to help, but what you're asking for is unclear to me.
Yay help! But not the lyrics to be exact. Just like, idk. I wanna make it catchy but to fit the lyrics. Y'know? Like I'm not asking for someone to write me the chorus but just give me ideas on how to make it catchy. Bars. I'm open to tone changes (high/low pitch etc) and stuff like that...
Im a Musician, I play Piano/keyboard & Guitar. but what kinda song are you wanting to write? Like Genre?
Well, idk what the beat/instrumental but the lyrics are hip hop ish. There are 32 lines in the first verse but the each berse is about 2 minutes long (two verses) And it's a bit fast paced. I'm just looking on advice/ideas on a catchy chorus. The instrumental is a bit weird and funky but I like it. And the lyrics are.... Well, let's just say love.. Lol
I'm almost done Lyrics are done. For the Chorus, I only need like 4 more lines. Already have 4. So I'm halfway done with the chorus. Ahhhhhhh!
Progress is always a good thing. It seems ridiculous that I still don't understand what form of help you were/are seeking. Hah. Are you going to be sharing the finished product with PiMD?l I play electric guitar, acoustic guitar, electric keyboard, and very little organ.
Umm... Well, ima record it in my music recording program, edit it (my voice is horrible. Has to be done. lol. nothing major tho) and upload it. So it would be in a video.. Lol. I guess I could pass around links if people want to. Well.... I played the drums for about 2 years. Pretty good at em I guess. I can also play my sister's recorder..... Lol. Taught her how to play the Titanic song (My Heart Will Go On) Call Me Maybe, Dynamite, and Party Rock Anthem. Lmao