I decided to write, and i just want to share this to you all. Im not a pro, please dont hate nor say its stupid for how it ended.. For those who understand where i actually went, thank you. “I love you.” I watch as the light of my phone fade out from the text and let out a sigh. It has been 5 days and still counting. His last text before he disappeared to his busy works. Here I am, waiting, praying, and hoping for my phone to vibrate. “When was the last time we actually had a conversation?" “When was the last time we heard each others voices?” “I miss you, my mind craves for you, my heart aches for you, I miss you so much, I cannot even tell.” “What do I do just to make you realize I’m here?” “What do I have to do just to make you realize that I'm waiting for you?” “When will you realize that I've been crying just to be with you?” “Was life better off without me?” As my mind filled itself with haunting questions, I felt tears forming behind my eyes. My heart aches to be loved, but yet it is caged up in the darkness. I felt the loneliness crawling under neat my skin. I deserve to be lonely. I deserve to feel like this. Life would be better off without me. More tears fell as I walked to the kitchen floors, burning my feet with their frozen horror. “Is it better for me to die..?Answer Me..” my heart screamed in sadness, there’s no way out. I decided to wait for a few minutes for his text, maybe ill be saved, maybe he still loves me.. but no.. there was no light on my phone, there was no motion, there was no vibration. My life is over. I sat down on the cold tiles of the kitchen floor, crying for forgiveness. “I know you'll be OK... I know you will be.. with or without me..” Hugging my knees close to chest, I opened the chest of my memories again. “I LOVE YOU!!” you chuckled in my ear. That soft chuckle that makes me smile, and warm my heart. Your smooth skin where my fingers travel that gives me goosebumps. Your soft lips that marked me yours many times. Your face, so handsome, such features ill always love. “i love you..” I heard a whisper, and all sudden my memories disappeared, like a mirror shattered million of pieces, “Sent.” Dropping my phone right beside me as I walk for the knife cabinet. Silent tears, silent movements, yet, my heart beat fast. I grabbed the knife from its blade, watching it cut through my skin, breaking every veins it could find. Smiling through the pain I feel, knowing the life without you is worse that any blade could cut. I looked back at my phone, wishing for one more text, but there wasnt any. Like my heart broken into pieces that I can never mend. “I love you..” i whispered sadly, “i love you so much... I wish you knew..” Holding the knife straight to my heart, I closed my eyes and quietly whisper my last words. “i may never be the best.. but I tried really hard to be with you and to make you happy.. I sacrificed everything.. but yet it was never enough. I love you.. I love you... Thank you for everything.. I love you...” In one stab, I heard myself drop on the floor. Blood, I could feel it soaking my back and my hair, the hair he have always enjoyed to play. My senses started to fade away instantly, smiling, I gathered up all my strength, with my last breath mouthing the words “i love you.” My soul, trapped and homeless, sat beside a phone that has no message at all. “Ill be here.. waiting for you...” Hugging myself closely, I sat still, waiting for another moment to treasure. “Hey babe.. I know you’re busy.. I just want to tell you that I love you so much. When you read this, hopefully it makes you smile, hopefully you think of me.. cause I do.. I always think of you.. I love you, no one else. I miss you.. Please come back into my arms.. I love you...”
This is such a detailed story. You should seriously consider writing as a career!! It is a sad story, but you get the message across.
o my god I was expecting something light and fluffy like my janeinstead I find this depressing love tragedy hun all I can add to mike's comment about the amazing detail is to check your grammar, spelling, and punctuation marks. -The Grammar Nazi I love my Jane
Wow I love it u have a talent, very well written. Good job Jane I look forward to reading more of your work
Best Story Ever U make the World a better place by having the reader understand every bit of the story
>.< JR i write poetry as well.. Im more into poetry though than story, but ill try writing another one mich, thanks for thinking that way, it really cheers me up I love you guys<3
>.< JR i write poetry as well.. Im more into poetry though than story, but ill try writing another one mich, thanks for thinking that way, it really cheers me up I love you guys<3
I like the story but after speaking to you I know that it could never be about you because no person in their right mind would ignore you. You are an amazing person and have talent keep up the good work. Our vows should be amazing.
ok...I'm a readoholic and that was an amazing story. you have a talent for writing but I agree with eevee on the spelling, grammar and punctuation...autocorrect is a killer isn't itjust watch half the stuff I say on cc -_- gibberish I tell u. but that was hands down awesome and I'd love to see more of ur stories.
This was so depressing but u could completely understand the girls emotions and that's a writers giftand u sure have it Jane the mighty writer. Btw r u sure that was ur first story too good to a first