I love you, my dear sibling

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Cherry1313, May 27, 2012.

  1. Orchid POV

    I shut my car door, excited to get inside. I hopped up the stairs, two at a time. Flinging open my bedroom door, i dumped my stuff on my bed. Slipping out of my yellow and green uniform. I put on my playsuit and twirled my long, wavy, bronze hair into a top knot. I lightly put on mascara and eyeliner over my deep blue eyes. My door clicked open, it was Logan, my brother. His dark brown eyes always look so adorable. His tanned skin and muscular abs and arms entice me. His tousled black hair was so sweet. God I love him. He threw his arms round me and kissed my lips hard. I know it's not supposed to be right, considered incest and against the law. I love him, he knows how to love me and fills me with love. Physically and emotionally. I pulled back and gazed in to his revealing brown eyes. I always knew exactly how he was feeling just by looking at them. Right now it was love in his eyes. Sweet love. For me. I smiled at him tears silently rolling down my face. Happy tears. "Hey what's wrong gorgeous?" he whispered.
    "I love you. And I can see in your eyes you love me too. Nothing's wrong, it's perfect." he smiled at me, embracing me with all his heart. Suddenly my Mother walked in, we sprang back, but of course she was oblivious to what we had just been doing. She always was. She dumped some clothes on my bed. Completely ignoring me! She hadn't even acknowledged we were in the room! I know she loves me but she's so busy at work that she becomes blind to anything but jobs and work. I'm so lucky to be able to go through it with Logan. He feels my pain, he understands. Maybe that's why we're such a perfect match. I usually go through my pain alone. This time he wouldn't let me. He's so admirable.


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    BTW I know this kind of incest has been done before but I do things differently so I'm not having the same stuff because I want to make this my own story and I will try and make it as original as possible. 
     
  2. Logan POV

    My silent, overworked Mother walked out the room. Orchid's eyes looked so sad. I slowly walked back over to her. Her eyes were staring down at the floor. Why did my mother have to ruin everything? Ugh, I can't believe her. I put my hands on either side of her waist, her glistening, blue eyes staring up at me. She's not small, 5'8 I'm still 6'1 though so I beat her by a wide margin. I grinned at her. "Come on babe, forget her. She's not important anymore."she nodded and laid down on her bed, sighing. We talked for hours, about school, our friends, our lives, the things that had gone wrong, the things that had gone right, what was bothering us. Anything we wanted. She snuggled in my chest. "You're like a radiator" she giggled.
    "I'm so hot in this bloody shirt" I threw it off she pulled back and looked up and down my body, stopping at my abs. "Yes you are" she smirked.
    I laughed and rolled on top of her. We'd been doing this about a year. I'm 15 she's 16 we've never had sex but I didn't need to to know how I felt and what I wanted. It was pretty difficult to deal with our emotions at first, we'd feel angry at eachother just for feeling the way we did. Once we figured it out things were so much smoother. It's relieving. She laid a light hand on the back of my neck."I love you" she whispered. I rested my forehead in hers. "Back at ya" I grinned. I kissed her lovingly, she slipped her hands over my chest. It made me tingle inside. Mmmm. I slid my hands under her the shorts part of her play suit. She chucked it off and unbuttoned my jeans. Eventually we were both nude and it just went from there, as you can imagine.
     
  3. Right I need at least 2 bumps to continue this thread
     
  4. Only joking I'm going to write this story even if I have no readers
     
  5. I prefer the old story with shay and the others. But I need to give this a bit more time so I can say if it's better or no. Come them coming 
     
  6. And just because I got a free wall art app 'ᎻᎯᏉᏋ Ꭿ ᏪᏐᏨᏋ
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  7. Cameron im writing both stories at the same time I have no social life whatsoever so I can handle it 
     
  8. I just wanted to write something more modern and realistic
     
  9. Ah sweet cherry you have do much love to share. I can't wait to see how both stories go
     
  10. By the way what is a bump?
     
  11. Logan POV

    I felt the crisp white sheets around me, the sun streaming in from the window. I rolled over till my hand was draped over Orchid's slender body. Her eyes fluttered open, she saw my face and pulled me in for a hell of a long morning kiss. "I have to go get ready for school, but we can ride together today?"I asked her. She nodded and reluctantly let me slip out her room unnoticed.

    Orchid's POV


    Wow. Logan is so fit! He was amazing, I get to ride with him today. Bliss. I showered in my bathroom. Smelling extra nice today! My uniform wasn't bad, i guess. We have no ties badges instead. I pulled on my short green skirt, gold shirt and green blazer. My simple black flats and sped out the door with my union jack bag. Logan was already in the car, looking cool and hot. I opened the door and jumped in. The car was still in the garage so Logan leaned over and kissed me open mouthed. "Miss me?" he murmured against my lips. I rolled my eyes playfully and let him drive me in to the car park. Then we raced off to our friends. They are so cool, my best friend Faun was there. Her ginger hair sparkled in the sunlight. We chatted for a bit our big group, I am pretty much the leader. I stand up for everyone, I know how to fight back with words, I kick a*s, I'm loyal and trustworthy. That's why I was given that role. It was me, Logan, Faun, Shane, Ali, Reina, Marko and Finn. I loved them all. We're pretty much the most popular kids in school, no one messes with us. We have a band and we've done quite a few gigs as well as school dances.We all have our roles in the band:-
    Me:Lead singer
    Logan:Lead guitarist
    Faun:pianist
    Shane:Base and songwriter
    Ali:Backing singer and guitarist
    Reina:Saxophone and songwriter
    Marko:Manager/agent
    Finn:Drummer
    It's a big band but somehow it all works. 1st, 3rd, 4th and 6th period I had with Logan, what a great timetable! Me, Logan and Shane headed to philosophy. It's confusing but simple. So interesting. Philosophy is a pretty open class, generally we sit in a circle, Mr. Avergrade will pick a topic and everyone's free to discuss it. I like philosophy.
     
  12. Bonez I have no idea yet I use them all the time
     
  13. AWESOME! BUMP! Oh BTW, what's the name of the app? :3
     
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  15. Oh yeah! ΒμΜρ
     
  16. I like it its not what i thought but goood
     
  17. I like it a lot! Bump bump!