I hope you like this Song

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Entity_Of-The_Beast, Dec 15, 2012.

  1. I've got flaws, she's got ceilings,
    When she wakes I'm still dreaming
    The long days get me thinking
    Always get me thinking
    I've got doors, she's got windows
    I see in but only she knows
    What goes on underneath the ceiling
    I wonder what she's thinking
    I wonder what she's thinking

    When she lies in bed coz
    when I wake up she's in my head
    And i'm thinking in a few years time
    will I still be yours will you still be mine.
    We can't build our walls
    Unless you knock down yours
    So let me in

    I read books,
    he writes stories
    He's so calm
    When I'm angry
    And I'm not sure what he sees in me
    Won't tell him what I'm thinking

    I wonder what he's thinking
    When he lies in bed coz when I wake up he's in my head
    And i'm thinking in a few years time will I still be yours will you still be mine.
    We can't build our walls
    Unless you knock down yours
    So let me in

    I wanna be inside your house
    I wanna be inside your house

    So let me in
    So let me in…

    I wanna be inside your house
    I wanna be inside your house
     
  2. Omg. Sounds like stranger danger 
     
  3. Sounds like a she wanna break in. I'm sorry but I don't like it that much.
     
  4. I can only read it as words. Doesn't sound like a song.
     
  5. Sounds inspiring, besides the last few... 
     
  6. I agree with Michael. 
     
  7. I agree...it doesn't sound so...good...it actually sounds like a story...Well, I like it...but it would be better if it had music to it!!  Srry! 
     
  8. I have music to it but there's no way of actually posting it with music is there lol
     
  9. It's a good start has alot of potential fix up the flaws and you might have a good song 
     
  10. I like it and I'm silenced James