Hurt

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by BreeTanner135, Dec 30, 2011.

  1. Preface
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    A cold tear trickled down my face.

    I silently sobbed. Alone.

    My life... isn't what it was.

    My lips were to weak to pull into the smile that used to always sit there.

    It was getting to be too much.

    Life was slowly draining from me.

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    Chpt1
    "Tom!!" I squealed as my best guy friend picked me up.
    "What you're afraid of heights also??" he laughed at my wimpiness.
    "Yes in fact I do now put me down here come Anne," my best girl friend rushed to meet us. She was so pretty her ebony skin was rich in color and her hair was so soft and manageable I loved playing with it. She walked to us with the same cheery smile she had when she saw us and a glisten in her chocolate brown eyes.
    The three of us were inseparable, best friends! only... Anne was in deep meaningful love with Tom while he was mostly interested in me. Tom was literally TALL dark and hansom, he was so strong his body was so gorgeous... but he wasn't my type. Although he was so sweet and caring a total gentleman and protective I found him rather deceitful; Anne did not.
    We walked down the hall like any other normal day, chatting and laughing to loud.
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    So do you guys like it so far? I got bored and wanted a new story... A shorter story;)~ᏴᎡᎬᎬᏃᎩ
     
  2. This is kind of a back story srry
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    In this state these were my best friends, but my true besties were military siblings stationed in Germany. The boy, Matt, was like an older brother to me, with him around no one would mess with me. He loved me like he loved his sister, the only girl who understands me. Christy is fun and happy, she understands me more than anyone. They look a lot a like brown hair pale aqua eyes, Matt is chunkier... but they are polar opposites. Matt is sarcastic and blunt he isnt the brightest star in the sky either. Christy jokes like me-crudely- she is very creative and we are both in advance classes. I really love them.
    I miss them but I my boyfriend even more, we broke up because I couldnt handle long distance relationships. We dated for a year and a half and he is my one and only true love. We agree that we can see other people and maybe get together again.
    He had to move back to Alaska with his mom and sister leaving me here in sunny Florida. He left in the middle of this year, Sophomore year, he is a grade ahead of me and I'm hoping by my graduation he'll be back waiting for me. He was my first date first love first kiss, my everything I loved him so much.
     
  3. The day was over, we[Tom Anne and I] walked to Tom's car. He was the only one with his license so he usually drove us home, unless my brother wasn't going to be with his friends or girlfriend. I lived closest so i hopped out of his truck hugging Anne and said goodbye.
    I then walked into a house empty of life other than my little grey tabby cat Em and my big Rotwiller-Pit mix Miles, who dawned a leather spike studded dog collar to appear even more vicious. My mom worked all from 12 noon to 10pm my dad from 6am to 7pm but normally stayed out until midnight. I didn't care they weren't that great anyways. If my brother was home he'd be playing MW3 or CoD and I'd only hear his irritating incessant rambling.
    For the most part I stayed in my room when they were home. I had everything I needed acces the the bathroom a TV my phone a bed a mini fridge and anything I found I needed I got and kept in my room.
    No one ever came in here unless my mom was cleaning so when I came in to see my window wide open and a book open on my bed I was a little surprised. I called Miles in he rushed in already in defense mode and started sniffing. I picked up the book and read the page it was left on, a gruesome part of the book describing in gut wrenching detail the rape and death of the main character. I closed the boon a little frightened and saw a note tapped to the back. I was about to read it when my cat ran in hair standing up.
    Then miles started barking, I held him by the collar as I followed his line of vision.
    I saw him.
     
  4. I'll update if I can get 4 bumps or comments;)
     
  5. Ok for now I may update so I can finish this and start my knew one:/
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    A man stood in the kitchen dressed in black, I couldn't make out anything about him. I stared for what seemed like eternity and he finally walked out the back door and disappeared. I then shut and locked my door and texted Tom and Anne.
    In a few minutes they were at my door. Tom went through inspecting my house, we were going to the police station in a little bit. Anne asked if he left anything and I remembered the note. We opened it. it was a typed letter reading

    Helle love,
    I love you!! Can't wait to be with you I've been watching you for a while. It's hard to get close to you with that dumb mutt, you should probably put him in a kennel! And I don't like how you hang out with all those guys especially Tom with how he looks at you. Your mine and I hope he knows that. You've always been mine so don't get any ideas... If Mark comes back don't get together with him. Your taken, off the market. And if you hurt me by cheating I'll hurt you worse, but I know you won't!
    See you soon;)

    I was shaking by time I finished reading the typed letter, Tom had made his way behind us and also read it. Quickly he got us into his truck and he bolted down the road to the police station.
    A tear rolled down my cheek as I stared out the window. As we left I thought I saw him again but I didn't say a thing. Anne patted my back reassuring everything would be ok.
    We had gone to the station and gave them the note I also told them about the book and seeing him. They sent detectives to look at my house,but didn't find anything so they had 2 detectives on duty to watch me one on the house another on me when I was home I only needed one. All I asked was that my parents wouldn't be informed. They weren't and everything went back to normal until Friday.
     
  6. BUMP!!! Fantastic writing
     
  7. Thank you really!!! Every little reader makes me happy... Apparently I'm not a very popular author... Thanks I may update again;)
    ~loves my readers~
     
  8. Ok I meant last year not this year this is supposed to be taking place as Juniors;) update coming
     
  9. Srry long


    Anne left early because she was sick so I walked alone for the large part of the day. I was walking outside to drama class and saw him. My life lit up, my heart swelled, I began running towards him until I saw he was headed for another girl. I wouldn't have cared if he met another girl because we agreed that would be best... What I heard killed me.
    "Bethany!! I love you"
    "Mark!! Omigoodness what are you doing here!? Did you move?"
    "No I just couldn't bare living with you here I had to come back. For you, I convinced my parents... It took a lot but anything for you."
    She wasn't even pretty face caked with make up 6inch heels boobs obviously stuffed and spray tanned. Mark didn't like that did he? She was so fake... They were kissing and I was staring hurt filling my eyes.
    "Excuse me? What the hell are you looking at? Baby please yell at this perv!" he did as she said, turned around and started to speak.
    "This is priva... No!" tears were welling up I couldn't deal with it. He reached out for me but I ran. Right past my detective watcher, i was gathering a small party following me-Mark Tom and my watcher.
    They were men they were strong and fast. But I... I was a girl with a broken heart in desperate need of escape. My legs pushed me further stretching as far as possible and throwing my body forward with every step it was more like flying. I went right past the house, picking up my speed to avert the house watcher. I went deep into the woods until my asthma kicked in.
    Sobbing silently I crumpled to the muddy forest floor. I felt utterly defeated and I wished with every ounce of me that my stalker was here and would kill me. Right now.
    Because my heart was broken way beyond even the idea of repair and my life.
    Was.
    Over.
     
  10. OMG I LOVE IT!!! BUMP! Yay FIRST!
     
  11. Bump bump bump!!!
     
  12. Brilliant. Nothing more needs to be said...
     
  13. Awe thank you!! Ok I got the 4 bumps I wanted so here's the next part!


    I could hear Tom calling my name, his deep base voice more distinct than the others. Then I could pick out Anne's sweet voice calling, she was closer than the others Tom had texted her.
    I stood up and walked to her.
    "Mark's gone Tom made him leave... One of your watchers was taken of the case you can go home."
    "Ok tell Tom to leave I'll be there in a bit..."
    "Do you wanna tal-"
    "No." She left it at that and walked away for Tom to take her home.
    Again I was in my house alone my watcher out side he was going to be taken of the case soon. I was fine and the police saw that they knew I'd be fine.
    I walked back into my room... It was incredible to know my family had NO clue what has been happening for the past two weeks. I flopped onto my bed folded my arms over my chest and stared at the ceiling as hot salty tears snaked into my hair.
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    Eventually the tears stopped flowing and I became bored. I slipped on my glasses and pick up my book, Romeo and Juliet on I had read 100 times. A soft love story that ended in tragedy I hurt me to read reminding me to much of the days earlier happenings. I set the book down and looked at my clock, 8:23, late enough to be dark but I knew neither of my parents would be home any time soon. My brother was with his girlfriend probably... I absentmindedly twisted at my purity ring at the thought. I was the only Junior I knew that could truthfully wear it, not even Anne a good godly girl that wasn't very strict.... I rolled of my bed and went to the kitchen. After getting water and a sandwich I went back to my room and painted my nails. Ten coats later I flipped through my Pandora stations, finally finding my only two scene bands in an attempt to relieve my boredom without making me cry. Even music got boring, I had done all my homework, watch two TV shows, practice every instrument, sketched a little and taken my shower.... It was only 9:30 so after quickly scanning Facebook I hoped in bed and waited for sleep to come. And even in my dreams I couldn't escape the nightmare I had today.


    5bumps and I'll update!:)
     
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  15. BUMP!!! Technically I'M THE FIFTH SO GO AND UPDATE!