The darkness surrounded me.Engulfed me.Embraced me.I accepted. 'Beep Beep' I tried to open my sore eyes but it was no use.Something felt different...Wait.Where am I? I forced them open and looked round the white shiny room.A hospital room. I groaned groggily as the heart monitor went on and on.Then realisation hit me. "Mum,Dad!" I yelled out, terrified.Seconds later they came rushing in, panic written all over their pale worn out faces. My mum,Jackie Copter, leaned forward and hugged me lightly whilst my Dad,Charles Spod, just stared. Since my Mum was approaching hysteria I glanced at my Dad, "What happened?" I asked, still with no memory. "We came home and you were unconscious in your room, you've been out for two days Mia.." His voice broke saying this and he turned away. I took a deep breath as the memory flooded back to me...(The part between the Asterisks is her memory) *It had been a normal day for Mia Copter Spod.She got to school, hung out with her friend's then walked home.She was always the first one home in her family ,as her parents worked full time, she saw the blood soaked note taped to the front door first.It had said that Mia would be killed at 5 am at 12 dino lane (made up), but it stated no date. She didn't tell her Mum or Dad as she thought it was just a joke and she didn't want to worry them.After hiding the note behind a bookshelf she ate a burrito....A poisoned burrito* I gasped, it now dawned on me how serious it was.My Mum and Dad gazed at me expectantly.I opened my mouth about to say something then shut it abruptly.I couldn't tell them.Mum was pregnant and Dad couldn't keep a secret if his life depended on it. " Um I better start getting ready" I muttered, hoping they'd by my feeble excuse. My dad nodded, telling me he'd be back in an hour and left with my Mum.Both wearing a relieved expression. I slowly climbed out of the creased hospital bed and walked towards the tall cracked mirror, trying to ignore the dull but consistent throbbing in my head. I looked at my appearance and immediately recoiled. My long wavy chestnut hair was tangled and looked like a birds-nest.My eyes were blood shot and my clothes were torn from falling.I looked a mess. I let out a long sigh and ran my fingers through my hair to make it a little better,however it didn't matter too much. I have bigger worries then that.I gazed out the slim window whilst straightening up my red familiar jacket. Lost in thought, wondering who would want to kill me. (The next updates will be in 3rd person and past tense though, but hope you like it )
*1 hour later* Mia sat in the car gazing out the window.Her parents chatter was just a murmur in the background.Her whole body was focused upon the upcoming events. A shiver ran up her spine.It made no sense...who would hate her that much.She shuddered violently, her life was usually just a boring routine...how could this happen? She buried her head in her hands and counted to ten. " 1-2-3-" She whispered then gave up.Her mind flooded with thought of how she'd die and who by. She was so distracted she didn't realise they had turned on to Dino lane (it's short but I didn't have much time,sorry)
Mia thought about who it could be but no answers came up.She let a cry of frustration out causing her parents to be alarmed. "Here" Her dad said,handing her a pill.It'l help with you're head.Mia nodded obediently and took it to keep up the act.Moments later she was fast asleep, not even a firework could wake her. Her Mother and Father exchanged twisted grins. "no need for the base ball bat then" Smirked her Father, pulling the Land Rover over into a shady corner. They got out her body and hauled her into House 12. "A job well done" He said to Jackie (her mother) whilst they chucked Mia into a dark basement, then went up the steep steps and locked the rusty metal door. They sat down outside the door and talked about their plans,waiting for her to wake.
(1st person this time) I woke as the cheap pills wore off.Where am I, I thought groggily as I looked around. It seemed I was in a small unfurnished basement.The basement was grey and dull with completely bare walls.Except a simple white clock...I tried to stand up but I was pulled back by a chair...Wait..am I stuck here? I tried again but to my my horror I was strapped down. I screamed out scared, how did this happen? I was only in the car going home right,? The large wide door cranked open as a man came in.My Dad. "Daddy" I cried out, then noticing the sharp bloody dagger in his hand. "D.Dad?" I chocked out but it was too late. He smirked a twisted smile I had never seen approach his not so innocent face.He put a gag in my mouth and my cries became muffled. I thought back to all the times he'd said he loved me. Shallow.Thoughtless. I was sick to believe him. Tears ran down my face as I remembered my past. I tried to call out for my Mum, not sure if she was on on it either.But it was too late.Dad watched the clock...5 seconds to 5 am.I closed my eyes for the last time, fear now controlling me.I said a mental goodbye to my friends and waited for death to come.It was over. ************************ Next update will be in someone else P.O.V probably
Why r her parents killing her? I think in their pov you should explain that. Or maybe they aren't her parents and she was kidnapped at a young age just something to help us see reasoning, but I love your words and I think this is brilliant
Thank you..And her parents part will be explained at the end.It all links together at the end or near but till then I like the reader to guess
??? P.O.V I smirked as the puppets drove away with their daughter in a body bag.The things humans will do for money. I shook my head pulling a disgusted face ,from inside the bush next to House 12. "At least it makes my job easier.." I mutter to myself watching the red gleaming car disappear into the distance. I climbed out the thick bush ignoring the scratches on my pale bare arms and climbed into my own sleek black car parked around the back of the house. The chase is on.. (Sorry its so short.Im out of ideas for what to go next)