My feet acke for I have been running from the truth. What started out as a passion, ended in a nightmare. I can't believe this happened to me. Why me? My whole family left me, and so did my friends, when they found out the truth. As I ran, the wind blew hard, notifying me that winter is jussst around the corner. But it can't be because if I get caugh n the winter, I'll change. I fall to my knees when the cold air hit me, and I lay on the sidewalk, thinking about what my life could have been if I had never met James. I was just strolling through the park when I met him. Neither one of us was paying attention when he bumped into me and caused me to fall."Oh no. Are you ok?""I'm fine." I said dusting myself off. Immediately, I noticed his eyes. He had the most beautiful eyes I've ever seen. Silver mixed with grey. I couldn't let this one get away. I had to make my move. "Um I'm. Miyah.""I'm James. Do you maybe wanna go somewhere?""uh..."" To go get some coffee.""yeah. Sounds good." I guess I couldn't help but to agree. He was just to cute. 20 minutes later, we were on his porch, as he felt in his pocket for his house key. When he opened the door, he led me to the kitchen."I'll make the coffee, you just make yourself at home." Which I did. The coffee was perfect, just the way I like it with extra cream. "So um you go to the park often?""Only when I want a cute boy to awkwardly knock me down."" Hey I'm really sorry I knocked you down and did you just call me cute?""Maybe. Only because I mean it." So we started talking and laughing and soon enough, we locked eyes. I instantly saw everything that I liked about him. It was like magic. Lost in the moment, we kissed. It felt like a dream that you'd never want to end, and I didn't. We made love right there on his couch. We lost control. He started kissing my neck in a very sexy way. Then, he bit me. "Ow. I really brought out the animal in you, huh?"" I am so sorry.""my neck hurts.""let me go get you some ice." As he prepared the ice, I went to the bathroom ad looked in the mirror to see how much damage he caused. I noticed something peculiar. The open skin was closing right before my eyes. Is my eyes playing tricks on me? Then I just went back to the couch. "Here use this.""Uh nevermind. I don't need it.""oh." Then he looked down at the ice nervously which made me wonder what was wrong."What's wrong?""Miyah there's something I have to tell you.""okay."when I bit you...I...I couldn't help myself. And that's because I'm a werewolf. ""So if you're a werewolf and you bit me. Which means I'm a werewolf.""well its not official until you change."change? ""When you stop being human.""you expect me to believe that?""Miyah look at my eyes. These aren't normal eyes.""I know."when you stare in my eyes, what do you see.""hurt,pain,death.""these are my werewolf eyes. What you see in these eyes is what a werewolf sees.""woah.""they say its supposed to be cold tonight prepare to change.""I gotta go." As I stepped out,the cold ripped at my skin. I fell to my knees and shook. I was changing and I knew it. Am a werewolf. Read more in How to Reach The Silver Sun Part 2 .please comment.
Good, but spread the paragraphs, check the spelling and every time someone new talks you have to start a new paragraph.
Please please PLEASE leave a line between separate speech. Check spelling and grammar, and use paragraphs.