Hopelessly Devoted

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mrs_Nellie_Lovett, May 13, 2012.

  1. I slowly awoke, my soft sheets soothing my burning skin, the light shine of the sun seeping through my curtains, the welcoming decor of my bedroom made me feel safe.

    I slowly stood, the hardwood floors cool underneath my feet. I slipped on a soft burgundy robe, and I walked down the spiraling steps.

    "Alice, dear, you'll be late for school again, if you don't let me drive you," the plump red faced man, I call my father muttered. "I'm fine," I sipped my glass of orange juice, and crossed my arms.

    "Alice, time to get dressed," my frail, old grandmother said. I nodded my head and went back up to my room. I carefully looked through my closet, searching for my uniform.

    I finally found it buried under a pile of.... Undergarments. I quickly slipped on the white blouse, the blue plaid skirt, the navy blue knee socks, and a pair or leather shoes.

    "Alice! The bus!" my twin brother Peter announced. "Coming, Peter!" I bounded down the stairs, carefully grabbing my bag, bursting out the door.

    I jumped onto the bus, sitting beside Peter. His piercing green eyes looking up from his book to glance at me. "Alice, you forgot your glasses again," he tapped the lens of his, and smiled. I groaned, and slammed my head against the hot glass window of the bus.

    He laughed, and pulled me close to him. "You can borrow mine," he offered. I blushed, and carefully pulled them off of his face, slipping them on mine. "Thank you, Peter," I smiled. "Anytime," he went back to reading his thick book.

    Even on the saddest of days, one look into his eyes make me melt. One hug from him, gives me butterflies. One word spoken out of his mouth, makes me blush.

    Oh Peter... Why do you make me feel this way?
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    PLEASE. Do not say that I just want to be like everyone else with the incest. It's not going to be just like that. Feedback please!
     
  2. I LIKE IT JILLY.
     
  3. 
     
  4.  Qin! 
     
  5. Wow I loved the first paragraph. It drew me in!
     
  6. Do you guys want to see pictures of them?
     
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    Alice and Peter in chino form
     
  8. I love ur story and artwork. The paragraphs drew me into their world.