Him.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *karinaLolly (01), Feb 24, 2012.

  1. Guys its my first time writing a story- Anyway, i'll be using more of my sister's iPhone. And tell me how to improve 

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    6:15AM

    "Ugh. School again! And there's 3 hours of Mathematics." I said as I woke up, preparing myself for school.

    I went to the bathroom, took a refreshing bath, brushed my teeth and wore my favorite white top and my black skirt. I brushed my hair neatly, and then went down for breakfast. My mood cheered up as it was my favorite breakfast- Cookies! I quickly gobbled down my breakfast and went to my friend's house, Abigail, as we usually walked to school together. I knocked on her door, and she was all ready with her neat straight hair, Purple jacket and long pants. "Tammy!" she said. "What took you so long to arrive? We are supposed to be at school by 7 am sharp or we get lecturing!"
    "What?" I stared at her in disbelief. I looked at my watch. Oh heck! It was 6:45AM. "We'll never make it there in time!" We eyed each other and dashed to school.

    7:00AM
    Phew! Me and Abigail made it there on time. As I tried to find a seat in the assembly hall, I got sight of my dream crush, Ken. He was so awesome, charming, handsome. Not only that, he was one in a billion, a kind soul in the heart. All the girls in my class fancied him- Even though he had a girlfriend! If he could be mine someday.. I thought. I also wondered if he liked me somehow, because he always stared at me and hang out with me every lunch break. Tammy, you must be out of your mind! Kelly is his girlfriend, he wouldn't look for a fool like you! I told myself.

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    Bump if you liked it? Sorry but i can't do updates too much- I'll try to use my sister's iPhone.. Haha! :) (10 Bumps to Update)

    ~LollyPOP
     
  2. There's already a story named 'Him'...
     
  3. So? Who cares? It's great! Bump!!!