Him

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *TaylorrLovesYou (01), Feb 16, 2012.

  1. Whoa... Butterflies... Do you ever get them? It's like that strange feeling in your stomach you get as your going down the big hill on a roller coaster.
    Well I don't need a roller coaster to get them, I get them from him.

    Dylan. Was he the perfect guy? Maybe not to some girls. But he was to me. He was tall-ish, about 6'3", dirty blonde hair, blue eyes that shimmered like an ocean of diamonds when he smiled. Ohhh, his smile, completely flawless. He was just irresistibly gorgeous.

    As for me, I'm exceptionally pretty. I didn't consider myself an eye popper or anything. I have wavy, dirty blonde hair, brown eyes, and I'm short, just over 5'4".
    I was absolutely head over heels for him. He probably didn't even like me in the way that I liked him.
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    I hope y'all like it so far...
    Sorry of there's mistakes 
    My first time/:
    Feedback is greatly appreciated!
     
  2. BUMP
     
  3. Thanks :)


    I want to update, but not if no one is reading ?
     
  4. I like it! So good so far! Continue please bump!
     
  5. So far pretty good kinda sounds like an original oratory 
     
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    "Hey Nicole" Dylan said, flashing me his winning smile.
    OhMyGosh, my head is reeling!
    "Oh, h-hey Dylan" I nervously said, trying not to sound like a total lovestruck idiot.
    "Um, well one of my friends are having this, party... On Saturday.. I was wondering, if you wanted to go with me?"
    I hesitated, was this really happening? What do I say? It must have been a good 45 seconds because he quickly said
    "You don't have to if you don't want to, if you have plans, I-I mean I'll understand"
    "No, it's okay! I'll go with you!" I spat out in a rush. I didn't want him to change his mind. I was practically in love with him!
    "Ok cool. I'll pick you up at your house around 7?"
    "Yeah, that's great!"
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    I sat in algebra just gazing off into another world, all of my own. I kept replaying the conversation. It wasn't much, but it was something. He pretty much asked me out on a date. Not technically a date. But as far as I cared, it was a date.
     
  7. I'm sorry of its bad, guys. Like I said, its my first time...
     
  8. LOVE IT TAYLOR!
     
  9. I love it so much it's great if this was a book I'll buy it or rent it at the library nice one Chloeit's really great hope you add morewish you the best with this
     
  10. Surprisingly enough, I got through the day without losing my head. But it was Thursday. I had two days to get myself together for the party on Saturday.

    I went home and I told my mom about everything. I don't keep anything from her. She's always there for me. I commend her for that.
    I decided to call my best friend Alyssa.
    ring ring ring
    "hello?" Alyssa's soft voice said through the phone.
    I explained to her all that had happened and by the time I was done, we were both beyond excited. She told me she would come over tomorrow after school and we would go shopping for something or me to wear.
    I couldn't wait to see Dylan tomorrow. His glowing smile and his icy blue eyes. Even thinking about him sent chills up my spine.
    Im the happiest girl on earth. I lay down on my bed and thought to my self. Drifting to sleep...
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    Boring, I know! I'm sorry! I have an update ready for tomorrow morning:)
    I like it, I think y'all will! I'm going to bed! Night guys!
     
  11. Bump!!!!!
     
  12. It's good! Don't doubt yourself! You have talent!
     
  13. Bump! It's really good!:)
     
  14. It's amazing! 