So this is my first fan Fic so please no harsh if I get 5 bumps I'll continue I looked at myself in the my mirror inside my locker. I hated look my looks,I thought so myself My long flat boring hair and my green eyes.I slammed my locker shut and look at Sophia with her 2 drones Emma and Olivia who were couple feet away.Everyone adore,love,and feared them.
Sophia had blonde long wavy hair and deep blue sea eyes.She was head captain of cheer team. Suddenly Sophia walk up and said So when will a loser like you finally leave high school. I looked at her but I decided to look away. Actually why do we Popular people have to share the same air as you. I can't help I'm popular,pretty and athletic, she said with a evil grin. Knock Off Sophia!shouted Dylan.
Sophia POV ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Olivia and Emma ran up to me and said Well? She got lucky this time by... By who?!shouted both of them. Dylan!!Urghh! I have to figure out a way to get Dylan to like me no that loser Raychel said Soph. We walk to the front lawn of the school.Thinking of ways to get Dylan to like me..kept saying Sophia.Then a mysterious man walk up to us..
Hello ladies,I think can I can help you only for a certain pay By the way names Rolf said Rolf.Sophia thought about it and said yes.Ok good said Rolf who had started his hands with a evil but creepy grin. So here's the plans... After about 20 minutes discussing about the plan we knew there was gonna be a big surprise soon for Raychel...
As Dylan and I sat at lunch together I started to space out.I was wondering why Dylan I had pulled me away from Sophia yelling at me and I was now sitting with him at lunch .I mean he the star of the football,basketball, and hockey team . He had crystal blue eyes and brown medium wavy hair . When I got back to reality I heard Dylan kept on repeating my hair Raychel..Raychel. He waved his hand in front of my eyes. Oh yeah sorry I zoned out said Ray. I felt my face getting hot. I thought to myself oh god I'm embarrassed myself in front of my biggest crush Dylan Johnson. It's okay som- Yo dylan said Sean who was Dylan best friend. He had sat down with us.
Sean look me then Dylan and again me. A-are you to dating. Dylan jumped yelled NO! Ok ok relax I was just asking said Sean.So how are the things with you and Sophia said Sean. It's fine you know she pretty,smart,athletic,and funny.As Dylan said those words about Sophia there was throbbing pain heart. I got up and started to pack my stuff and leave. Wait!where are you going?Can I drive you home if you?shouted Dylan. I thought at first I thought it would crazy but i decided just get a ride.Sure I guess. Sweet.Cool.said Dylan as he started getting his bags. As we were in the car he decided to put on the radio. He was everyone lyrics right with such a perfect tone. Everyone things was perfect about him.
It's good! When a character talks use the " " it makes it easier to read. Like this: "HELPPP!" screamed Zoe as she ran down the dark, wet, cold street.
perfect about him. He look at me with his tan skin he says "Don't you just love Carrie Underwood"?He said with a smile. When I saw that smile my legs started to feel like Jello-o. "Yeah she's the best" said Raychel with a smile back. As soon we got to my house I was about to get out when Dylan stopped me. "Hey Raychel wait"!"I wondering if you wanna hang out later"?I immediately said yes. I couldn't help it the boy a perfect dream guy."Cool I'll pick you up today around 4 so bye". I walked into my house and told my mom I had date."Mhmm he's sounds like a very interesting boy"said mom with a weird smile . I'll think I'll like him better Brandon. My mom immediately close her mouth "Sweetie I'm so sorry I didn't mean to"-It's okay mom i'll always love Brandon but he's gone"I don't think I to remember memories of him it's makes feel sad and depressed said Raychel depressed. But it's time for me to move on. "That's great sweetie now do your homework and get ready for your date"