"HE'S MINE"

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *EMMA_- (01), Jul 17, 2011.

  1. Ok, I get it lemme think I guess it's my turn.
    Maybe it's time to put this pussy on ya sideburns.
    He say I'm bad, he prolly right.
    He pressin me like button downs on a Friday night.
    I'm so pretty like, me and my pedal bike,
    Me and my low skirt,
    Me and my ankle whites.
    He sayin' Nicki don't stop you da bestest,
    And I just be comin off the top as bestest!
    Suddenly a girl appeared next to him. He didn't see her walk up the road cause he was listening to some tunes. The girl had shoulder length Hazel coloured hair and green eyes she was wearing black legging and a turquoise long top to was short but cute. Max had never seen this girl before *she must be new* he thought
    "Hey, so how long until the bus comes, do you no?" asked the girl.
    "ummm"max looked down at his watch "10 minutes" he said.
    "oh I'm kaylee by the way" the girl said.
    Max took his ear phones out
    "and I'm max"
    "cute name" kaylee winked and max
    Max blushed a little
    "so your new" max asked
    "yes sure am" she said "Iv moved from Canada"
    "well welcome to America California" said max!
    "thanks, I don't no anyone here. I'm so nervous" kaylee said looking at max batting her big eyelashes!!
    "I'm sure I can show you round" max replied.
    Kaylee squealed and hugged max
    " thank-you so much" kaylee said
    "it's cool" it was the first day back at school and he thought he would make a good impression"
    The bus arrived and max got on followed by kaylee. There were 4 seats leaved
    1 by Sean who was sleeping
    Another by kim who was applying eye shadow
    And 2 seat together
    Kaylee sat in the seats together and max followed.
     
  2. "so who do you hang out with in school then?" kaylee asked max
    "oh me 'n Sean are kewl"
    "Hahaha does he normally sleep on the bus? She laughed
    "yes he does no one noes why" he said
    Suddenly the bus takes a sudden right u-turn
    Everyone slid over and some fell off their seats and some hit there head and worst.
    Kaylee saw her chance and jumped on to max's lap facing him with her thin legs raped around him
    Max was startled by this.
    They looked into each others eyes and kaylee looked at him in a sexy way. "sorry bout that kiddy-winklies a wrong turn"
    Sean was laying on the floor wide awake "Yo man we aint kids we like 16 init" Sean said
    Kaylee got off max's lap but sat very close to him.
    The bus pulled up at Parkland High. And everyone got out. The bell rang to tell people that lessons started in 15minutes. Max sat down in front of a just grown new tree and kaylee sat in front of him looking at his blonde shaggy shiny straight hair and his light green eyes his jeans and a checked open shirt with a black top under Neath. He also had on red,silver and gold snickers on. Kaylee thought he looked super fit with all his muscles. They stared at each other for a bit until kaylee stood up then max stood up as well
     
  3. Perfect make-up and her soft long brown hair and wearing short denim shorts and a light purple tight top and pink sandals, Layla got off her b_m_x bike n locked it to the bike rack. "hey Layla" shouted Michael. "hi guys" she called back
    As she walked across campus grounds facing away from michael and his mates a few of them wolf whistled at her ! Layla stuck up her middle finger at the lads without even looking behind her "ouch" called the boys "you broke our hearts" the jokingly said Layla giggled as she walked off.
    As she walked round the corner she saw max she had missed him even though she had only just seen him 4 days ago at sean's beach party!!
    As she got closer she saw max wasn't alone.... He was with a girl.
    Oh god she thought. Layla new that lots of girls flirted with max because he was super cute!!! But this was different the girls was acting all sexy and cute!!! So Layla started running towards them, getting faster and faster until she got close enough to jump into max's arms. She raped hr long legs around he's waist and started to passionately kiss him as max span round and round. Kaylee felt well jealous she didn't realise that max had a girlfriend she was about to step back and get to lessons because the bell had just rung but she didn't she suddenly had the thought to get this boy for her!!!
     
  4. Puncuation and grammar.

    *wrapped

    And its a great story. Please continue!
     
  5. I like this storyContinue!!
     
  6. am i gonna be in it
     
  7. I couldnt remember how to to spell it
    Thxz 4 telling me
     
  8. Im pretty sure thats me. Im not positive though. Lol. If it is, I love my character . Haha and the story is great. Keep it up! 
     
  9. I enjoy ur story
     
  10. I love your story!!
     
  11. Oh lol I just made up the names but I guess it can b u if u want
     
  12. Lol I couldn't remember if I had signed up for ur story or not. That's why I said it lol.
     
  13. I didn't have any sign ups lol