hell's end

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by kittehwars, Jul 7, 2011.

  1. by kittehwars
    on Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:52 am
    Trevor sneaks through the woods, trying to be undetected, when the where-wolf pounced. Trevor fired his shotgun, blowing a hole in the where-wolf's belly. Trevor looked at the creature and thought "well, I can't sell this pelt.

    Trevor began to walk aimlessly, as usually. He thought "god, this forest is too freaking big!" when he noticed a building. "finally a town" he thought out-loud. He walked into what looked like a ghost town, but what what he really walked into, was a living hell.

    by kittehwars
    on Wed Jul 06, 2011 10:39 pm
    Trevor walked into town. He could smell death in the air, but he guessed it was just the lake near by. He walked into the bar and was greeted by a young looking bar tender and a man in a suit and top hat.

    He slowly walked in and sat down, but when he did the suited man moved to a farther seat. Trevor look at the man with a questioning look then ordered a beer.

    "what's with the blood, kid?" the bartender asked. "eh, ya know, werewolves" trevor replied. Then the suited man stood up and motioned for the bartender to follow. "sorry, man, but we're closed."

    after that the suited man and the bartender walked away, together. Trevor walked out, confused, but he knew he needed a place to sleep. He decided to sleep in the town's tower, the purpose being to stay out of sight.

    Meanwhile, the bartender and the suited man were talking in an underground cave. "there's something not right about that hunter!" exclaimed the suited man. "how do you know he's a hunter?" replied the bartender.
    "well for one thing, I read his mind! You dolt!"
    The suited man then slapped the bartender.
    "sorry! Sometimes I forget you're a demon, ok?"
    "no! Not ok! We must kill the hunter!"
    "why?"
    "he is a threat to me! If he discovers my Identity, he will surely kill me!"
    "ok, I understand."
    Then it became night, and suddenly the bartender grew two fangs. "now I am ready to kill!" said the bartender
     
  2. That's right, I reposted the story with a better name
     
  3. Sounds great!