Ghetto Poetry

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by ChocolateThunder, Dec 13, 2017.

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  1. Give you irresistible pleasure,
    On an unimaginable measure.
    Naw, it's not a crude guesture,
    So there's no need to lecture.

    Your voice is a sweet symphony,
    Reflecting in my recent memory.
    Lurkers oozing an aura of envy,
    As we bond wit great efficiency.

    In the midst of making history,
    We indulge in great chemistry.
    Always striving very efficiently.
    Intertwined ideas of sympathy.

    Hate often tends to ricochet,
    Except when you're in lingerie.
    Love is as sweet as a bouquet.
    Hands start to imitate crochet.

    So much beauty in my presence.
    What makes your very essence.
    None compare to your relevance.
    None compare to your elegance.

    No intention is ever counterfeit.
    The room is quiet and moonlit,
    Two hearts ache and commit,
    While old tendencies submit.
     
  2. Just cause they don't think I'm poetic enough :roll:
     
  3. Didn't you say you was done posting...and how is the ghetto poetry...ehh better than uzi vert none the less...switch your rhyme scheme tho...they don't always have to only be at the end
     
  4. By "ghetto," I mean it's not proper. I rather use "ghetto" than the term, "ratchet." No, a different guy said dat, lol. I don't always rhyme the words at the end
     
  5. None the less, dig it
     
  6. Says the one who failed to gain clout off of me and lost clout in the process. Ahem, congratulations, you played yourself
     
  7. Says someone who has proven multiple times to be a better, more clever, and faster writer than you are... on or off of this app. You have no clout. You just pop a lot of fuccery tbh. We are not alike. I actually make money and do real shít. Keep working on your bars. Don’t compare us, unless you’re going to start being honest with yourself.
     
  8. You're not more clever, nor better, nor faster on or off this app. Biting lyrics ain't dope. You don't make more money than me by being on underground mixtape sites and what do you do besides from being a lolicon? Not once have I posted serious bars on here. It's all been about entertainment. You're not on my level. I had a better flow than you in elementary school. I don't see why you're looking down at the ground, when I'm above you. No explanation why tho?
     
  9. Rhyming at the end is ok, but he could switch to schemes like ABBA or ABAB, instead AAAA, BBBB, etc.
     
  10. Your opinion will be taken into consideration. Thank you for the feedback
     
  11. Then you swear I have no clout. You're a goofy. You always posting on my threads wit some hater shìt. Why you always on my díck? Ease up, clown
     
  12. Prove any of that lil dude? You and all of your supporters that actually spit bars have lost to me when I was officially challenged by any of you. That is very clear to anyone who has ever written serious rap lyrics.

    Even when you guys teamed up and attacked me unprovoked, it was rapid fire multiple “L’s” for your whole team (including your biggest supporter who multiple people have called legitimately “crazy”... a middle aged single white mother from the uk, who has never rapped in her real life btw, and also thought London had a higher crime rate statistically than St. Louis, MO... that’s who you roll with homie?) serious or not bar for bar... and I didn’t “bite” a single lyric. You still haven’t proven anything more than a reach for the “one” bar that you claim I intentionally took from little wayne, when my line was a far different play on a commonly used phrase. Then you proceeded to try and redirect my post that was a general statement to whoever wanted it, at yourself, and call it a sneak diss... again more FNS. Then you went on to say that the statistics I posted were from 2015, when they were updated in Oct 2017. Then you locked all these threads because you looked like an idiot by the end of them. Facts!

    Reality check, you have been suspect and questionable since day one... ask anybody if you are confused by this statement. I have been real since day one. There is a difference. I don’t look down on you... I feel bad for you, and I hope they cure that disease you’re infected with real soon.
     
  13. Such huge paragraphs smh
    No support btw
     
  14. Reading it does nothing for me. I need to hear the flow..sowwie.
     
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  16. Cool I'm imagined each stanza alternating between rap and a slow sopken word performance.
     
  17. You're right, it was ghetto
     
  18. Hi Thunder, you soo own chillz he is one big PHONEY.Not only does he steal people's lyrics:- he also doesnt rap he presses the buttons of other peoples rap recordings with them rapping on the lap top and pretends it is him doing the rapping.He is soo transparent and PHONEY its pathethic.You own him and beat him to a pulp again, and again and again.His jealousy of your skill is clearly evident. Even Flocc knows what a fake that chillz is even if he is not saying it outright. I know he knows all that i sayd about chillz was right.He even steals peoples stuidio and gun photos and pretends they are all him.Even his gun collection photo with bullets spelling out chill are from someone else called chill.He is a counterfeit and identity theif.Nothing about him is original he stole some strangers persona and nickname and thought if i use it on a dating game that is so far removed from the street and rap life.That nobody will be able to pin-point where i stole all my phoney persona and stolen raps and stolen recordings from.Its really sad that people need to spew so much hate towards someone who is so creative,fun and talented.And mods do nothing to stop it. Keep shining Thunder you a star in the making. Merry Christmas.
     
  19. And talk some more lies about me chillz i will be back to finish you off.
     
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