I looked into the musical box my friend gave me, I listened queitly into the slow melody It gives. I smiled slyly at the small toy fairy that spinned slowly like an ballarina. Small sad tears streamed down my flushed cheeks, It reminded me of that person's cheeky but lively smile.
Good good You have a few mistakes but, make your updates longer, with paragraphs. More detail and description like 'pink, small ballerina' understand lol? And just fix some spelling mistakes.