My book that I'm writing and need input on If y'all want to give it here's chapter one I put my head down on the forest floor and let all the tension that had been storing up inside me flow out.It was simple, amazingly so to tune into my inner animal. No Im not a ware wolf Idont physically change in to an amimal,though the ware wolves do sometimes stay at my place when traveling,I'm a physic animal, a animal in the head not in the body. When I let my animal like instincts take over I do things I wouldn't do in public like nuzzle ,growl ,whine and fight ( sometimes play sometimes not.).I have to tune in almost every day at night so I don't loose it at school with all the drama and boys who act like wild animals. I've been training with my grandmother though to help wit that she only haves to pshyc once every month. Finally I was in tune. I ran on my feet, snaking through the forest surrounding house I can still relize human things and do human things but my body wont respond usually. I saw the wolves come in from all sides running with me I understood the growls "pack member back, get torrent." torrent was my wolf mate well in his book we were mates. I was 13 and they found me psyched out in the woods trying to hunt. Normally they would drive out intruders or kill them but not me because they thought I was human until I spoke to them. I can speak the way of all nature a little but mostly predeters. That got me a visit with the alpha, Winds he asked what I was and I told him what my grandmother had told me. It always skips a generation so I couldn't talk to my mom about it, if she and my dad were still around. Winds considered me and said that when I was animal I would come to the pack and I would be treated as one of the pack. That was the first night I spent with the pack the wolf that had found me was torrent. He followed me around and at the end of the day lay with me in the cave. My animal self didn't mind his attention he was a big brown wolf with Plae yellow eyes,very big and second in the pack. Though human me thought it was kinda of weird. Things got really weird though when I was getting ready to go and another wolf,rider tried to nuzzle me torrent ramed him and said "Jennete is mine!"I was really shocked well I was still psyched out so I went up to torrent and brushed my noes to his Making it official that we were mates.Now I am 16,3 years of being with the pack and torrent. As we entered the cave a big blonde wolf came at me I crouched and growled and recognized winter the big wolf who loved to play with me we wrestled for a while taking small nips at each other until we were both tired . "Jennete pack play fun torrent want to see you." wolf speach just cuts to the chase and leaves out all those annoying words you trip over. As if summoned the big brown wolf came up and pressed his mussel against my shoulder."jennete,mate missed you lay? Play?"torrent always wanted to do things with me that would keep me away from other wolves he was very territorial."lay Played with winter already." torrent and I made our ways to the back of the cave were I rested, my head by his front paws hid warmth clocking me. I smelled blood and rabbit leaping up I ran towards the food,torrent close on my heals letting me be in front the pack sniffed the food and let winds eat first I smelled for the rabbit and licked my teeth which were aching to tear into the food. Torrent brought the food over to our corner and we ate. I begged to run out with the pack to celebrate the rising of the moon like they always did every night. Torrent finally agreed and we joined the rest of the pack outside,they were all moving around side to side waiting to run winds finally howled the okay and we all took off into the night. The wind rustled in the night blowing my golden brown hair to the side out of my face torrent running besides me howling at wolves close to us enjoying the feeling of running with his mate.The night wasn't a bad start for my sophomore year. LILIN: I waited till jennete was gone before approaching the wolves she was my best friend.i had to be able to turn torrent human so they could be together some how. I saw the wolf and whistled his ears picked up and saw me. Jennete had interduced me to the pack before and they all knew my scent. As he came closer I whispered the spell "let the one who is on fours open doors With body of a human With wolf in the background let torrent and Jennete's Love be found" torrent whined and suddenly started to jerk back and forth until he was lying on the ground with spasms moving his body. His front paws tuned into arms and his back legs jerked back shifting into legs. His fur shrinking into his body. His snout shrunk back causing him into howl. Hie ears lowered and changed there shape this pale yellow eyes grew darker till they were forest green then brown to match his hair strait and messy.his teeth tuned from sharp and pointed to a perfectly straight set of choppers. He shuddered and finally it stopped."what did lilin do to me?" he was still talking likes wolf only the growls turned to English and I could understand. "I made it where you can be with jennete in all times of the day and in all forms. You should be happy." torrent looked at me and nodded "come on I have some clothes for you. I'll let you have a memory spell so you can join high school and be with Jenny." torrent leaped up supprisiling able for the recent change."I will see jennete at school. I can be with her I this form?" I nodded he was good looking but I was focusing on not looking down. I hoped jennete would be just as happy with torrents change as torrent was.
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I put my head down on the forest floor and let all the tension that had been storing up inside me flow out.It was simple, amazingly so to tune into my inner animal. No Im not a ware wolf Idont physically change in to an amimal,though the ware wolves do sometimes stay at my place when traveling,I'm a physic animal, a animal in the head not in the body. When I let my animal like instincts take over I do things I wouldn't do in public like nuzzle ,growl ,whine and fight ( sometimes play sometimes not.). I have to tune in almost every day at night so I don't loose it at school with all the drama and boys who act like wild animals. I've been training with my grandmother though to help wit that she only haves to pshyc once every month. Finally I was in tune. I ran on my feet, snaking through the forest surrounding house I can still relize human things and do human things but my body wont respond usually. I saw the wolves come in from all sides running with me I understood the growls "pack member back, get torrent." torrent was my wolf mate well in his book we were mates. I was 13 and they found me psyched out in the woods trying to hunt. Normally they would drive out intruders or kill them but not me because they thought I was human until I spoke to them. I can speak the way of all nature a little but mostly predeters. That got me a visit with the alpha, Winds he asked what I was and I told him what my grandmother had told me. It always skips a generation so I couldn't talk to my mom about it, if she and my dad were still around. Winds considered me and said that when I was animal I would come to the pack and I would be treated as one of the pack. That was the first night I spent with the pack the wolf that had found me was torrent. He followed me around and at the end of the day lay with me in the cave. My animal self didn't mind his attention he was a big brown wolf with Plae yellow eyes,very big and second in the pack. Though human me thought it was kinda of weird. Things got really weird though when I was getting ready to go and another wolf,rider tried to nuzzle me torrent ramed him and said "Jennete is mine!"I was really shocked well I was still psyched out so I went up to torrent and brushed my noes to his Making it official that we were mates.Now I am 16,3 years of being with the pack and torrent. As we entered the cave a big blonde wolf came at me I crouched and growled and recognized winter the big wolf who loved to play with me we wrestled for a while taking small nips at each other until we were both tired . "Jennete pack play fun torrent want to see you." wolf speach just cuts to the chase and leaves out all those annoying words you trip over. As if summoned the big brown wolf came up and pressed his mussel against my shoulder."jennete,mate missed you lay? Play?"torrent always wanted to do things with me that would keep me away from other wolves he was very territorial."lay Played with winter already." torrent and I made our ways to the back of the cave were I rested, my head by his front paws hid warmth clocking me. I smelled blood and rabbit leaping up I ran towards the food,torrent close on my heals letting me be in front the pack sniffed the food and let winds eat first I smelled for the rabbit and licked my teeth which were aching to tear into the food. Torrent brought the food over to our corner and we ate. I begged to run out with the pack to celebrate the rising of the moon like they always did every night. Torrent finally agreed and we joined the rest of the pack outside,they were all moving around side to side waiting to run winds finally howled the okay and we all took off into the night. The wind rustled in the night blowing my golden brown hair to the side out of my face torrent running besides me howling at wolves close to us enjoying the feeling of running with his mate.The night wasn't a bad start to my sophomore year. LILIN: I waited till jennete was gone before approaching the wolves she was my best friend.I had to be able to turn torrent human so they could be together some how. I saw the wolf and whistled his ears picked up and saw me. Jennete had interduced me to the pack before and they all knew my scent. As he came closer I whispered the spell "let the one who is on fours open doors With body of a human With wolf in the background let torrent and Jennete's Love be found" torrent whined and suddenly started to jerk back and forth until he was lying on the ground with spasms moving his body. His front paws tuned into arms and his back legs jerked back shifting into legs. His fur shrinking into his body. His snout shrunk back causing him into howl. Hie ears lowered and changed there shape this pale yellow eyes grew darker till they were forest green then brown to match his hair strait and messy.his teeth tuned from sharp and pointed to a perfectly straight set of choppers. He shuddered and finally it stopped."what did lilin do to me?" he was still talking likes wolf only the growls turned to English and I could understand. "I made it where you can be with jennete in all times of the day and in all forms. You should be happy." torrent looked at me and nodded "come on I have some clothes for you. I'll let you have a memory spell so you can join high school and be with Jenny." torrent leaped up supprisiling able for the recent change."I will see jennete at school. I can be with her I this form?" I nodded he was good looking but I was focusing on not looking down. I hoped jennete would be just as happy with torrents change as torrent was.
<!-- chapter: Chapter 2 --> <p> Chapter2 I entered woodland hieghts feeling very tired from the night before. I had barley made it to my bed before midnight to unpsych and get enough sleep for school. I looked at my schedule and headed for Honors biology. Unlike the rest of my classes I was really good at animal systems and the way they functioned. I had mr.lumbard who was always nice to me and admieried my knowledge on the dead animals rather than try and stump me like my old science teacher ms.roberts. "why miss jennete how nice to see you! I hoped you found your summer nice" mr.lumbard had a bit of a southern voice but it made him seem more real." I had a very good summer spent a lot of time with my grandma and some with uncle Luke." Luke was a werewolf who lived in town and always seemed to treat me like his niece. He had been good friends with my mom before she and dad left when I was three. I had just started psyching and my grandmother hadn't told them about the family secret, I took a bite out of moms leg and the next day my parents were packing, at the end of the night they were gone. I still don't know where they are. Grandmother said that she still had contact and if I ever wanted to contact them to just ask her. Luke has takin care of me ever sense, well him and grandma she bought the house where my parentsamd me lived and now I lived there and when a ware was traveling they could stay there too." well that's good, you need to get out more often and start hanging out with us indoor folk" mr.lumbard was always trying to get me to hang out with people my own age, but how do you get close to someone when you have so many secrets? I sat down in the second row lab table and who of all people sits next to me but Tyler Dall, captin of the football team! He had sandy brown hair,was tall enough that I had to look up at him a little,he had some bulk but his muscles were mostly lean and smooth. " hey Jennete. How was your summer?" why was Tyler talking to me? I was that girl who was good at sports and didn't try to be girly though I did have a girly body. "good yours?" why was I talking to Tyler? He probably only asked about my summer to be nice he was a nice kinda guy. "It was awesome we had football camp and all these freshmen showed up,but only half were serios the rest were there only for the title. It was kind of funny actually." He went on to how the couches were a little harder this year but I tuned out thinking to my self,wow I thought that boy can really talk about football. Mr.lumbard tapped on his desk and said that for the first month we were going to talk a lot about cells but them we were going to dive in on evolution and animal systems aka dissection. I took the notes but wasn't that focused on them because Tyler would now and then brush his knee against mine. Also when he started a new line on his notes his arm would always touch my arm! The animal in me knew what he was doing, he was making it clear to me and the others in the class that he was interested. Though human him probably thought he was only silently flirting. When the bell rang and I was getting my stuff together Tyler went up to mr.lumbard and talked with him until I headed for the door. He paused in the doorway letting me go first but that only made my shoulder touch his chest. He smilied at the contact, a blush crept on my face so I headed down the hall toward my geometry class and saw that mrs.beckens was teaching it. She didn't really like me because she also taut my freshmen algebra1 class and I am not know for my math skills. "miss jennete how nice to see you.I hope you have decided to try and take math more serisoly this year. Remember if you slouch off like you did last year even once, I will tell your grandmother that you will be taking conting money which does not give you your math credit now does it." She smilied wickedly and my inner animal growled. After the horrors off math was over it was time for my favorite class. P.E. I saw couch lenn and gave her a wave. She was a tough teacher with the sides of her hair shaved and the rest spiked up. She had a tatto on her back of a knife and ruler crossed. I saw that we would be sharing the gym with the boys because their gym was under reconstruction. Lilin my best friend in school walked up to and gave me a big hug "hey Jenny how was your summer see you got a tan. I wish I could tan but my sticker skin will forever be a deflate porcelain.Like one of those dolls..." lilin was always hyper and never stayed on topic, she was also a witch and knew about me and torrent she was always super hyper about that. I told her about the runs and how spring and Winds had pups. So that made winter an aunt,though that was a human thing. winter just knew that the pups were her kin and she would protect them. I was about to say how torrent had let me hunt with him when a tap on my shoulder stopped me. I turned around and there was Andy also on the football team and really a really good runner on the track. "hey jennete the guys were wondering if you were going to be the photographer for the football games again this year?" I was in year book cause the photographers got to wander around school and don't have to come back to class until the end to turn in the cameras. I usually took pictures at the football games early on and in class go find somewhere to sleep. "um sure but why would they need to know that?" Andy looked away and from what I could see kind of blushed."oh it's just that some of the guys liked the pictures you took,that's all." he walked away heading back to the guys were they all started to laugh. Boys were just really stupid sometimes. Lilin said it was like I had animal magnitism with guys,though I didn't like anyone as much as animal me liked torrent. couch lenn came up and said we were to get into a group of four two girls and two guys. Me and lilin walked over to the side of the gym and were trying to go unnoticed and just get with the last pair of guys. Everyone knew my and lilin were the best climber and runner also lilin could duck and catch while I had perfect aim. Our plan never worked out though,like 4pairs of guys started to maker there ways towards us but Andy and Dylan got to us first."hey guys want to pair up?" Andy said but Dylan cut him off "why do you guys always come over here? Yall could pair with any of these guys." Dylan was a jerk and heartthrob,bad combo if you ask me. I looked at lilin and she smiled at me "oh we just want to not seem like we're snobs that's all. she winked at me and giggled. We spent the time racing with the other teams and of corse our team won. Earring us a pick of what we were going to do tomorrow in class.lilin wanted to do the rope( she likes it when guys try to see up hey gym shorts) but me,Andy,and Dylan wanted to do dodge ball. Dylan winked at me on the way out. I was walking to yearbook when lilin stopped me. "hey so you know how you said you like to spend time with torrent when you psyched.well I may have found a spell that can help you. Want to know what it does?" she smilied and so I had to ask her what it was or she would be pouty the rest of the day."what does it do lily?" she giggled some more and told me "It turns him human until like you he want to be an animal or he's under stress." I gaped at her, she couldn't be serious right. If torrent was human he would follow me all day I would have a boyfriend we could hold hands and maybe even kiss... I smiled to myself thinking of what that would be like. No I wouldn't change torrent. He choose me as I was and I should do the same, but still we couldn't really be together only in thought and torrent was second in the pack he would become alpha when Winds died. He deserved a real mate one that could be in the hunts and there all day not only at night."lilin I will ask him if he wants to but I don't mind him being a wolf. Soon he will move on and then so can I to humans or ware's." lilin looked away "well you see I kind of already turned him and he's going to be here tomorrow. I just need him to finnish the memory spell then he will be as smart as you and can come to woods! So I was just letting you know not asking sorry." My eyes opened wide and I shook my head. Torrent, my torrent was a human, he was going to be coming to my school and I was going to have to see him not in my animal self. What if he didn't like the human me? What if he blamed me for his new form and didn't want me to turn with the pack? The pack! What will the pack say now that there second is a human because of me! Oh lilin has gotten me in some tough spots before but nothing like this.
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I walked in to my yearbook class and suddenly wished I haden't. Amanda chief of the yearbook was yelling at sandra about her getting the names backward or something when they turned and saw me. "Jen you go and take pictures of classes and students who are wearing school colors with the teacher outside okay." Wow I thought Amanda didn't like my pictures. She looked over my shoulder to see Nathen walk in with Henry. Nathen was an okay guy kinda short though but Henry was a full blown case of nerd. He had glasses tucked in shirt and Lego hair. Nathen saw me and waved,he knew that I didn't really like to take pictures and would sometimes cover for me. "Nate go with Jen work like a tag team okay go go go we don't have all day people." Nate and me got through the classes pretty quick and on our last class we encountered the J.J.T. They were the popular girls in our school Julie,dumb,pretty,and was so blonde her hair was almost white. Tiffiny,nice,smartish,and should have gotten better friends. All coming up to Janice,blonde,wavy locks that were natural,and a total mean girl some of us want to throw her in the way of a bus to see if she would survive. "oh hey jennete here to take my picture.your yearbook should be happy I wore gold today maybe it will sell out this year unlike last year where like you had 30 books extra." ugh nothing smart or good came out of Janice's mouth. I took the picture with the J.J.T and got out of there fast usually Ashley would be with them but she was in yearbook causing her to be a back up popular girl.she was smart and a red head. I didn't know how she could put up with those girls. It was 10minutes until class was over and lunch would start so I told natethen that I was going to catch some z's, he nodded and agreed to cover for me. I woke up to the librarian saying it was lunch time and I needed to go eat. I headed down and saw that lilin had saved us a table. As I headed over I saw Dylan,Andy and Tyler were waving me over, I was going to ignore them when lilin poped up right next to me and led us over. I saw that Tyler had just gotten out of football cause he had wet hair from the showers. "hey guys what's up?"I didn't know really what else to say. "oh we wanted to invite you to a party this weekend. Dylan's parents are out of town and it's Saturday Friday is the game and we need some r
rr so what do you say are you and lilin coming?" Tyler was waiting for our answer and I really didn't have an excuse for why I couldn't come so I had to say yes. "hey do you guys want to sit with us?"Andy asked,he was also a nice guy I just didn't see why nice peolple hung with jerks. Lilin nodded and I got up to get my lunch bumping into Janice dumping her salad all over her. "oh sorry Janice didn't see you." I could see that she was fuming. "you are the most stupid, ugliest girl in the whole school I don't know why these guys hang out with you but you can be sure that I will not forget this, you are such a loser!" With that she shoved me to the ground were I immediately sprung into a crouching position,well you know how I can't be stressed out or I psych out, well with grans training I can let tension out in short bursts. I growled in my throught to silent silent for anyone to notice,and sprung swiping at her face. In a effort not to claw her, I flattened my plam slapping her hard,making her stagger into Julie who was trailing behind her. I immedietily unpsyched and took a deep breath lowering my head so no one could see me give my last snarl. Lilin was shaking her head and the guys were staring at me with wide eyes "sorry I just kinda lost my temper." Then the most amazing thing happened Tyler shrugged and said"she shouldn't have shoved you. She deserved it well tell the teachers that she shoved you hard and you were just using self defense it's cool." I was shocked that I went up to Tyler and hugged him "thanks Tyler, your awesome." lilin laughed "now all the guys are going to say that they'll cover for you to get a hug." She was really laughing now that she saw Dylan and Andy scowling at Tyler though it was suddle. English and world history blew by and it was the end of the day. My first day was over so fast,it was a miracle I survived it in one piece. With all the tension, the first day usually brings unwanted pshycs
Srry i haven't updated in a while but I'm still trying to get this part right so tell me what y'all think
I made my way to the cave noticing that the birds stopped midway in there songs when I passed. I sensed the wolves anxiety, and how they would now and then growl at each other. When Winds saw me he headed over and brushed against my leg because I was standing at my full hight. 'second missing sorry jennete we look day,night' I nodded and weaves through the wolves to Spring, Winters sister. I knew that they wouldn't find him but I wasnt going to say that, he needed to. I sniffed at the pups , I was crouching now to be eye to eye with the mother wolf. ' jennete sorry mate missing second come home soon' I nodded and contined to study the healthy pups. It was two girls and two boys, an okay littler but not as big as it could be. I lay there playing with the pups now and then thinking on how this was my last normal night before everything changed. I knew that that if the pack thought we would weaken it, they would do anything to get rid of Torrent and I, then Torrent might do anything to get his revenge for me taking his family, his pack away from him. These were the thoughts that went with me as I fell asleep in the cave surrounded by wolves that could kill at a moments notice.