So I decided to write a story. I dunno why... It's my first story I've written so don't be hating please ------------------------------------ I wake up to the sound of loud humming. I slowly open my eyes and see my little sister skipping around my room as if she were looking for something. "What the hell are you doing in my room?" I say sternly to her. "I'm waiting for you to wake up. I thought if I hummed it would speed up the process" She smiles as she sits at the foot of my bed. "Well I'm awake. Now get out so I can get ready." I yawn and stretch as I stand up, her humming continuing as she skips out of the room, her head bobbing side to side, making her braided pigtails bounce. I grab a tanktop and shorts lay them down on my bed as I shimmy my pajamas off. I yawn time after time, pulling my clothes on and I go over to sit at my desk. I look at a picture that lays face down on desk along with a bottle of mascara. Lifting the picture up slowly as I sigh, seeing the photo of me 4 years ago, smiling big, holding up a trophy that I had won. I stand up and pull my hair into a ponytail as I walk downstairs and into the kitchen, walking toward the pantry as I grab a granola bar. "Bye mom see you after school." I quickly kiss her cheek and walk out, opening the package of my granola bar and I being walking to school. My best friend jumps infront of me and laughs as I drop my granola bar. "Ugh, Clara you need to stop doing that. I don't have enough money to buy breakfast at school anymore." I push her playfully and begin walking again, her walking next to me. "Sorry, Jess. It's just so funny!" she giggles. "Hey are you going to ask Noah to the "girls ask guys" dance today? I heard from Lindsay that she heard from Amanda that Amanda heard from Brooke that Brooke told Amanda that Brooke is planning on asking him." She looks over at me as I roll my eyes. "First of all, you need to stop with the gossip, its getting confusing. Second, he'd never say yes to me. He's like.. The most popular guy in school. Theres no way a guy like him could like a girl like me..." I frown as we walk into the school. "I gotta go to class. Text you later!" Clara says as she runs to her class. I walk to my locker and open it, seeing a note that reads "Leave Noah alone. He's MINE." I furrow my eyebrows and toss the letter into the trash can behind me, closing my locker and heading to class. I dunno if I'm going to finish it any time soon. It's super cliche, that and it sucks. Oh wells. I hope you liked it. Idk it makes no sense to me...
How would someone know about her and Noah if she didn't ask him, and it appears as if she doesn't know him all that well? It doesn't really add up. Otherwise, I'd suggest proofreading and not making it cliche like you said. Keep going.️