first attempt at writing a poem 

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by -UeU-HayesWickedSkits, Sep 28, 2014.

  1. You can see it in her eyes
    Her eyes were happy and full of life You could see it when she smiled That was different when she cried she didn't cry much so everyone thought But they never saw her behind closed - doors
    When her eyes were once bright
    She was full of hope she treasured every second and thought happy thoughts but now can't you see ? The joy has gone if you look close enough she hides her emotions Although she can try By faking a smile She says she'll do I'll she dies Little does she know Her eyes give her away Yes you van smile You can smile your life away This is good Smiling is happy of course However not when its fake its more like a heavy rainfall Not everyone sees .
    ? Is it good ? Not finished yet .