This is my first story... feel free to give me some help and pointers.. ------------------------------------------------ "Chris... Chris.... Chriiiis... wake up!" "Whaaa-!?" Chris Collins woke up instantly at the sharp sound of the voice and accidentally rolled onto the floor. "Owwww..." "Good morning sunshine!" sang his younger sister, Katie. Chris muttered a few words under his breath and got up off the floor. "Heard that." said Katie. "Screw you.." Chris shot back. Katie just laughed and walked out, leaving Chris standing in the middle of his room, still only half-awake. He eventually decided to start getting dressed and ready for the day. He pulled on his favorite black jeans, his ADTR tee-shirt, his red converse, and then he quickly ran a comb through his long black hair. Not thirty seconds after he had gotten ready, he heard a car horn in the driveway. "Chriiiis! Tyler is here! Now leave!" Katie yelled through the house. "Be home later! Don't blow up the house!" Chris yelled back as he walked out the door, heading out to Tyler's car. ------------------------------------------------ Comments? Like? Dislike? Anything is nice...
Every time I call my brothers I ask "Is the house still standing?" or "Is anyone mortally injured?" or even "Did anyone have any rollerskating with fire accidents?" If you knew my brothers, you'd understand. With my little sis I ask "Want anything from the store?"
Sorry for so long between updates. Had a little emergency. ------------------------------------------------ Chris and Tyler had been friends since Chris was seven and Tyler was eight. Ten years later they were still close, almost brothers. They almost looked like brothers too. They had the same style as each other, with the long black hair, band shirts, and skinny jeans. Tyler was a bit taller, thinner, and quieter than Chris. Chris had the deepest, bluest eyes that made all of the girls swoon. Tyler had emerald green eyes that seemed to always change colors. Even with all of that, they still looked like brothers. Chris climbed into the passengers seat, and was greeted with a high five. "You ready for this?" Tyler asked as he backed out of the driveway. "Hell yeah." Chris replied with a grin. "Then let's go." With that, Tyler sped off down the street. They were heading to what all of the teenagers in the small town of Grafton consider the biggest, best party of the year. This year was the first year Chris was able to go, since you have to be at least sixteen to go. He was excited, and could not wait to get out of the car. Fifteen minutes later, Tyler pulled into the driveway. "Woah." Chris breathed. "Woah is an understatement, man." Tyler said, staring at the house. The house where the party was being held was huge. It was at least three stories high, and looked to have at least seven bathrooms. Chris could see around the back of the house, and noticed there was a large inground pool. The boys started to walk up to the front door, mesmerized. Not five steps from the door, Chris was hit by something from behind that almost knocked him down. ------------------------------------------------ More? If so, tomorrow!