final goodbye

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by -SIN-SWEET-KEZZA, Sep 27, 2012.

  1. This is something I wrote on the day of my friends funeral.
    Rest in Peace Alice

    Raindrops falling down,
    Grey sky looming overhead.
    A tear trickles down my cheek.
    The heavens are opening up for you.
    One last moment to say goodbye,
    Until your spirit floats into the sky.
    The roaring of the thunder,
    The flashing of the lightening:
    They are both welcoming you up there.
    I didn't get to say goodbye;
    But on a starry night I'll look up
    And say goodnight.
    Then I'll know you will always be with me,
    At least in my heart and memories.
    Thank you for everything you taught me:
    Thank you for being there when nobody else was.
    Thank you for being you.

    Anyway hope you could be bothered to read it and liked it 
     
  2. From one poet to another... Thats a very powerful poem and you're very talented.

    ~AOD~
     
  3. Thanks aod 
    Means a lot 
     
  4. Kezza

    That was beautiful. You're very talented, as well as very sweet. 
     
  5. Thank you Jenni 
     
  6. Thank you kandy 

    I know I'm saying thank you to everyone but its a real personal piece of writing so I appreciate every comment 
     
  7. I also write poetry and have seen alot. I really like yours. You are blessed to be so talented. Thanks for the beauty :)
     
  8. Thank you Ellen 
     
  9. Not a poem reader, but I liked it 
     
  10. Thank you flare 
     
  11. Barbie,

    This poem made my heart cry right along with you. It is absolutely beautiful and I love every word.

     Ken
     
  12. Ken!

    Thank you so much 

    Barbie
     
  13. Nice poem rawr! Teach me how to write sometime 
     
  14. Haha hey deuce! Since when hve you called me rawr? 
     
  15. I dunno. Do u prefer kezzy? 
     
  16. Kezzie I don't like it with a y or just Kezza is cool lmao
     
  17. Keeezie it is 