Feelings Never Felt

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 10, 2011.

  1. He held his hand out to me, and I took it. He wrapped his delicate white wings around me and it kept me warm. He stroked my hair whispering the same things over and over again while I cried in his chest.

    "It's all right... It's all right... I'll protect you..."


    I looked up at him, his eyes so sincere and his smile so bright.


    "You promise?"



    "I promise."


    ----


    That was the last I saw of him, my guardian angel. But deep down inside, I know he's around somewhere. I just know. And when I find him, I'll never let go.
     
  2. It was a Monday, the worst day of my life. School day.


    I woke up and got off the bed, looking in the mirror.

    I was In my night gown and my hair was a mess.

    I was a 5'7 brunette and I had violet eyes. My hair was medium, it had this nice style where the front hair would be a bit curled at the end. Like a orange peel. It would face inward and touch my face, just like I want it to be. But now, my hair was a mess. And I needed To comb it.


    10 crucial minutes later!

    I finished coming and picked a random outfit. My special one. I put on my white T-Shirt with the blue outlined tweety bird and my ripped demin shorts. I put on my white uggs and put on a white head band. I was officially ready for the first day of my second year at high school. Yup. Lucky I ain't a freshman.


    I ate my breakfast and sat on my motorcycle, ready to roll. I drove to school and looked at the paper which informed me what class I am in.

    "Room 315, A."

    I always got A in grades and rooms. My grades were the best. If you were sent to A, that meant you were an honor student. If you got sent to B, you were average. If C, man, you'd be reading books upside down!


    I walked up the staircases and went in Room 315.

    I picked a random seat and sat down.


    "Class, we have a new student!"
     
  3. I like this:) CONTINUE
     
  4. The guy who was next to me stood up.

    "I'm Donte. Nice to meet you. I'm from England and I'm 17."

    Donte was pretty cute. His blonde hair looked like those manga hotties and his eyed were ocean blue. He was 5'9, but who cares? His skin was pale white and his teeth were a bright white. He smiled at me and sat back down. Did I stare at him? I blushed at the thought.

    "Hi, you are..."

    I smiled at him and replied,

    "Chloe."

    We kept talking throughout class and we became good friends. I smiled and said goodbye as the bell rang and went to my lockers.

    "Hey babe."

    Suddenly, the "hottest" guy from school, known as Lance, walked up to me. He had his hand on my locker and his arms prevented me from escape.

    "Lance."

    I snarled at him and he acted like he was shocked.

    "Woah babe, no needa get feisty! I have plenty of that ready..."

    I looked shocked and slid under his arms and was about to walk away.

    "Don't walk out on me like that!"


    "Whatever."

    I was about to walk away again until he grabbed me and pushed me back into the lockers.

    "Nobody. NOBODY. walks out on me."

    I spat in his face and he got really mad.

    "What'cha gunna do about it?"

    "This."

    He attacked my lips and became tugging on my shirt. I tried to scream but nothing came out.


    Then Donte came.


    "CHLOE!!!"

    Lance had already managed to rip a small part of my shirt already.


    I felt tears falling down my cheeks until Donte pulled Lance of off me. Wow. He was stronger than he looks although he was short.


    "Nobody interrupts me!"

    He was about to punch Donte when Donte appeared behind him and twisted his arm.

    "DON'T. EVER. DO. THAT. TO. CHLOE. EVER. AGAIN."

    He twisted it again, and Lance was yelling out curses.

    He finally let go and walked towards me. Tears were in my eyes and I ran towards him. I hugged him and he rubbed my back, whispering theses words,



    "It's alright... It's alright... I'll protect you."

    Then it hit me. Donte was my guardian angel.

    "You promise?"

    "I promise."

    I was in his arms while we walked back to class. I glanced at Lance to see him still yelling out curses while blood dripped out of his arm and made a small puddle. I shivered and hid my face deeper into his shirt. Somehow I saw the faintest of a smirk in his lips.
     
  5. Angels
     
  6. Tjis is really good! I love the plot so far. Keep up the good work. And in the words of everyone else, "MORE!" :)
    Kay
     
  7. Our next class was PE. I was in the changing rooms removing my shirt when I saw that the mirror had words written on it with red ink.


    "I will get you."

    It said. I gasped and walked backwards into somebody's arms.

    "I'll get you..."

    It whispered. I was about to scream when the person's hand covered my mouth and kissed my neck. I used all my strength and pulled away.

    I heard the person laugh evilly and disappeared into the mist.


    I quickly finished changing and ran out to PE.



    "Chloe!"

    Donte waved at me. I ran to him and hugged him.


    "I-I- I- Somebody's after me!!"

    I yelled. I hid my face in his chest and cried again.

    He rubbed my back and I let go. His shirt was now wet with my tears.


    "Oh Donte! I'm so so sorry. I didn't-"

    He put a finger and reassured me with his sweet voice.

    "It's ok Chloe..."

    He hugged me until Mr. Denvery came it.

    "CLASS!! FIFTY LAPS AROUND THE STADIUM."


    I gasped. Fifty?! The most that he ever pushed us to was just 5! Mr. Denvery was a NICE guy! Then I noticed something about his eyes. They were red. Not green like always.

    "WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR!? RUN!"

    Donte grabbed my hand and we ran.


    "Donte.. His eyes!"

    Donte looked and gasped.

    "Chloe, we can't stop it. It's the demon's curse and-"


    He noticed I was staring at him and blushed.


    "DONTE!! YOU *ARE* MY GUARDIAN ANGEL!"

    He nodded.

    "I'm sorry Chloe, after that embrace, I fell in a deep slumber. The demons put a curse on me. I tried finding you, honest! I searched for 3 years! Enrolling in different schools... But now I found you..."

    I saw a small tear in his eye. I smiled. I was 13 that time, and he was 14. We met in the park, I nearly fell and he caught me. We hung out more often, and then one day...



    --- flash! ---


    "MOM! DAD! NO!!!"

    A swift dagger appeared in the killer's hands and it cut through the couples' necks.


    Chloe blacked out and all she saw was black. She woke up in his arms and she knew she was safe.


    ----


    "Donte. I-"

    Suddenly, I couldn't breathe.


    "GASP!"

    I collapsed on the floor, trying to breathe.


    Everybody stopped and looked at me.


    "GET UP! RUN! I TOLD YOU TO RUN YOU LAZY GOOD FOR
    NOTHING!"


    "C-can't b-breathe..."

    I was about to stand when Donte walked up to him.


    "WHAT KIND OF PERSON ARE YOU. SHE CAN'T BREATHE!!!"


    Donte stood in front of me, his arms wide, showing that he'd protect me from anything.


    "You-"

    Mr. Denvery pointed an accusing finger at Donte.

    Then Donte stared at him in the eyes for a long moment.

    "GAAH!"

    Something black that looked like a ghost came out of his body.

    The ghost-like thing just laughed and said to Donte and me,

    "We'll get you!"

    He disappeared into the air, and everybody's eyes were in our direction. I could suddenly breathe again and stood up.

    "Donte..."


    "Got it."

    He clicked his fingers and everybody fell asleep.

    "Donte-"

    "Let's just go."

    I nodded, he pulled my arm and we were out of the scene.


    ----

    Who did that? Who was the one? Got any guesses?
     
  8. Next day!

    I wore my same outfit again and walked downstairs. Since I lived alone, no rules!


    I ate my breakfast and walked out the door to see Donte.

    "Hi Donte!"

    He waved and I ran to him and hugged him.

    "Donte, thank you. For everything."


    "Don't mention it. Hey, let's walk to school. We can catch up on lost times!"

    "Sure Donte!"

    We talked while we walked to school.
    I told him EVERYTHING about me. My secrets, everything.

    He told me that he the same then something he said caught my attention.

    "I have nowhere to stay."

    "Donte, you can stay at my place!"

    "Are you sure your parents don't-"

    A tear came out of my eye and he quickly replied,

    "I'm sorry."

    I smiled and said it was nothing.

    "Do you want to stay?"

    "Sure."

    We were at school when Lance came up to me.

    "Hello Chloe... And Donte. Chloe, I am sorry about the... Incident. I didn't know what came over me! Forgive me?"

    "Fine."

    "Great! Oh and, I'm throwing a party
    in Saturday. See you there!"

    He gave me an invitation and left.

    Lance. The 6'1 dude with muscular abs and black hair. Pale white skin and red eyes with leather jacket, he was any girl's dream boy. I just wanted my Donte.


    I smiled at him and we held hands while entering the school.
     
  9. This reminds me of a classmate and friend .
     
  10. This storys very good ya no init (lol)
     
  11. Lol I am in it. XD I feel like wanting a boyfriend called Donte. IDK
     
  12. I really like this. It's fast paced and good  MOAR!!! Can't wait to read more.
     
  13. I really really like this story. Alot. Update!!
     
  14. I walked back home alone. Donte said he'd be back later. I felt tired so I fell asleep on the couch.
    ----

    Donte

    ----


    I walked up to Lance.


    "Don't fool me. I know what you are."

    "Hey Donte! Huh? What?"

    He tried to look innocent.

    "Don't act dumb at me. Innocence and devils don't mix."

    His attitude changed and he glared at me.

    "She has to go to the party. Not even you can stop it. It's fate. Something you can't change."


    "I'll do anything and EVERYTHING to stop you."

    He slammed his locker shut and smirked.

    "Anything eh? I might just take a bit of her and leave if you get out of my way."

    "You know you can't take part of a mortal."

    "Yeah. So it just means one thing. IM TAKING HER WITH ME."


    "She'll only suffer, Luke."


    "Fine if she suffers, and now we're calling me Luke eh?"

    "That's your name. Son of the Devil."

    "Heh. Well Dontre-Naire, hope you find a way to stop me."


    He left me there. Thinking of a solution.
     
  15. Donte
    ----

    I walked back, my head throbbing with solutions. Yet everytime I grasp it, it flies away.

    I walled In the house, seeing Chloe asleep on the couch.

    I kissed her on the cheek and was about to walk into a room until she woke up and asked me something that would change my life forever.

    "Do you love me?"

    I looked at her, she looked innocent and sincere.

    I smiled and walked a bit closer to her.

    "Do you?"

    I was about to walk away again when she pulled my arm.

    "Yes."

    Her eyes were screaming at me with all she had. Love. She looked so perfect that I couldn't resist; I kissed her.


    The kiss was long, sweet, and passionate and it felt warm and had love. After a few minutes, we pulled away to breathe.


    "Sooo.... Is this a yes?"


    I smiled at her and nodded yes. That's when the clock struck 9. It was time for Lance's party.
     
  16. Lovely story Chloe <3 it Thanks for updating and ignore all the rude ppl who say negative thins And



    More
     
  17. Lol later. I promise.