Fantasy Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyBunny (01), May 18, 2012.

  1. I hummed a weird, lame song. Some say that my voice is quite beautiful, but I say that they're too stupid to realize I'm just a bad-tempered princess.


    "Crystal, help me get dinner ready!" My mom's voice rang out of the window. Ugh. She was the Queen of Aledia, who was quite mean.

    "Can I at-least go with Dad to the elf chamber?!" I shouted to her, starting to go to the elf chamber. My dad, the King always pulled pranks on the Queen. And you know who she is because I told you!

    "No! Now come here and start helping me! And I mean it Jasmin!" Again. Ugh. She called me by my last name and I hated it!

    I ignored her anyway, because I caught myself running, peacefully and beautifully. I hated it! I'm so ignorant and headstrong.


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    When I got to the elves chamber, I went in and saw that the elves were holding a golden trophy.

    "Wow! Delia, how'd you get this trophy?!" I said shocked and gaping.

    "We won a game called sack thingy." Delia said grinning, like he was the only one that won it.

    "But how-"

    Knock Knock

    "Hello Delia. May I come in?" A voice that was peaceful and cute said behind me. Woah. I was supposed to think of mean things about him!

    I turned around and saw a handsome prince if he was. He had dark brown hair and he was about an inch taller than me! He had a brown cape behind him too!

    "You may come in Prince Lucas." Delia said smiling at him and then at me. Prince Lucas came in like he was a king.

    "And who might this be?" Prince Lucas said kissing my hand, so I smiled then I looked mad.

    "This is Princess Crystal, Daughter of Queen Adelaide and King Emmanuel." Delia's voice said like a man.

    "Well, hello Princess or Princess Crystal." The prince said grinning at me like he was gonna be mine but I ignored him.

    "Delia, I better go." I said not looking at the prince.

    "Wait, can I come with you?" He said grabbing my wrist, his eyes were so shiny like gold! Crystal, not now!

    "My mother and father would kill me!"

    "I'll tell them who I am. Promise." Prince Lucas raised his right hand.

    I looked at Delia and he nodded.

    "Fine, but it's your fault if they get mad." I said sighing and going outside of the chamber.

    The prince followed me and started running so I ran after him angrily.

    "Race ya!" He said frantically and wittily. Ugh.

    I ran as fast as my legs could carry till I was home. I started going inside the castle noticing my mom cooking with dad.

    "Oh hi Queen!" I said not calling her "mom" and smiling.

    "Don't you "Queen" me, young lady!" The mean queen said angrily grabbing a spoon.

    "Well, sorry for ditching." I said giggling.

    "Crystal, I think you're going overboard." The prince interrupted the argument. My mom looked at him shocked.

    "And who might this be?"

    "He's Prince Lucas." I said going upstairs to change to a draped dress that was a little tight for me.

    I heard them mumbling about someone. Probably they were talking about me because I'm pretty mean.


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    I'm so taking a break.Sorry if it doesn't make sense or something. Someone smart give me an advice..