Facing Reality

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MSS_Fuzzy_Buddy, Oct 22, 2012.

  1. I felt myself waking up, I lifted my head, but only to realize that I couldn't see a thing. 'Weird' I thought to myself, I feel like its the middle of the day, yet I can't see a thing. I try to sit up, but I realized, I'm tied to a chair. I sit there for a few moments and let my eyes adjust to the darkness. When they do, I finally realize I'm in some kind of cellar....
    As I'm trying to remember the events from last night, a door bursts open. I lift my head to see who's there. But a terrible thought came to me..... I know this person, but I just can't think of who they are... Then it hits me. I know who this is, I know where I am, and I know that I need to get out.
     
  2. UPDATE OR ELSE SKY!
     
  3. Use paragraphs and more detail describe things how it smells and stuff like that
     
  4. Ok, I'll work on my writing
     
  5. UPDATE
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    I would recognize him anywhere... Nate Berkley, the bástard that stole my virginity. I felt a gust of wind enter the small room as he closed the door. He walked towards me.
    "what the fück do you want now you son of a bïtch?!?!" I screamed at him.
    He smirked, but didnt stop coming towards me. "I've come for round two" he said with an evil smile on his face.
    I broke into tears,"Why don't you just leave me alone you bästard!!! I hate you!!!"
    When he reached me, he took out a knife. I flinched as he brought it towards me, tears still Rolling down my cheeks. He was about to cut my shirt and the rest of my clothes when I heard someone from beyond the door call his name.
    He cursed under his breath and put the knife away. "You got lucky this time bítch!" he said to me, "but this isn't over, I'll be back!" He stormed out of the room, and when the door closed, I heard a lock click, and knew i needed to get help.
     
  6. Haha imma bad guy
     
  7. Stop bypassing your story will get locked! But I LOVE IT UPDATE
     
  8. Ik, that's really the only bad part, the rest is explosions
     
  9. Last Update for tonight!
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    I looked around for ways to escape, finally, I spotted a faint glow somewhere near me. I scooted my chair to the right bit to get a closer look. After studying it for a while, it hit me! It was my cellphone!! Now all I need to do is call for help. I realized that my hands where tied behind my back, to a chair. But it's a good thing my phone has siri! I quickly used Suri to text Eric, May, and Karl.
    For what seemed like forever, I sat in the darkness praying that my friends would save me. Finally, I heard a soft knock on the door, and a voice that whispered, "Sky? Are you in there Sky?" I recognized the voice as my best friend's voice, May. I quietly, but loud enough that as could hear me answered back,"May! I'm in here! Help me!"
    After a few seconds I heard them trying to pick the lock, or shall I say Karl, May's boyfriend who is probably going to be a spy or a ninja someday. In under a minute, I heard the lock pop and the door squeak open.
    In the doorway was May, Karl, and Eric. Eric hurried over to me, cut the ropes that tied me to the chair and helped me up. "Are you ok babe?" he asked me.
    "Yes," I replied back,"But we need to get out of here now!"
    One after the other, we quickly escaped the building and got into Eric's car. Before we left, Karl
    Turned around, hit a button, and the building blew up.
    I thought that everyone had been killed in Karl's explosion, but little did I know that three people had escaped, Nate and his partners in crime: Lexi and Aly. But not only did the escape, but they were in our car.
     
  10. OMG YEAH! Partner in crime wit aly and beast we gonna kill it!UPDATE SOON
     
  11. Awesome! Bump
     
  12. We so da bomb...and in their get away car
     
  13. I HELPED SAVE YOU!!!!! WITH MY NINJA BOYFRIEND  SWAGG
     
  14. Holy cow frogs .-. You haven't updated yet. Do so soon!!

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  15. Ok, ok, I'll update soon
     
  16.  I get to be with my baby again ^.^ LOVE THE STORY SO FAR 