Evanesce Of Moonlight

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by DoryRENAMED, Dec 29, 2011.

  1. I had to keep running. I couldn't give up. If I did, they would catch me. I wasn't sure how far back they were, but I wasn't going to chance it. I started to let myself believe that it wasn't worth it. What do I really have left to stay for? I should just let them catch me. No! Scarlet, you can't think like that. It's crazy! There are so many people to fight for! Mom, Dad, Ian, oh and of course lovely Dakota. Oh, how I missed them. I wonder where they are now.

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    Hello! Thanks for reading! I'm sorry if it's really bad. It probably is. It is my first fan fiction. I wanted to thank some people for helping my with names and such 39Strike and Hellfier2. Thanks guys! Sorry it's such a short beginning. I really wanted I get it out there! Bye now
     
  2.  interesting
     
  3. Thank you! 
     
  4. Its really good!! 
     
  5. It's great love 
     
  6. Ken- Thank you!

    Strike-  Thanks!
     
  7. Really good 
     
  8. yyyyyeeeeaaaaahhhh Melly great job best friend
     
  9. I got fresh vitality while thinking about them and ran much quicker. At that moment, I had heated a piercing scream. It sounded like someone was in agonizing pain. It never seeme to end. I wasn't sure who -or what for that matter- it came from. But, as always, I was scared. I had almost feints. I paused for a second, out of shock. But as I realized that I became more and more afraid of what was happening around me, I was wasting time for getting ahead. My chasers -whoever they are- probably got startled too! This was my breakthrough.
    Time passed as I ran through the deep forest. I hadn't heard anymore of the horrendous sound, which I thought was a relief. it must have been an animal or something. As I was running, my legs cramped up, my lungs had started to give up. I decided to stop traveling and to find some sort of shelter.
    I wondered around slowly until l came across a cave. I concluded that this will have to do for the night. I trudged over to the cave and sat inside of it. I was so exhausted from running, that my eyes started to close. My mind went clear, and I begun to dream and interesting dream.


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    Thanks for continuing to read! I hope you enjoyed this update! Lately, some people have told me they were confused, if you are confused please wall me. Thanks!

    -Melly
     
  10. Seems interesting I like it a lot so far
     
  11. Thank you very much
     
  12. This dream was different. I mean, I usually dream about finding Dakota. But this time I didn't find him, he found me. We were in a very light room. It was almost angelic. He was asking me if I was okay. I didnt reply, I moved my head around slowly like a baby. I was observing the room. He shot me another question, "Scarlet, do you know who I am?" I shook my head no, but murmured under my breath, "Dakota." he looked at me with a grin upon his face.
    "Scarlet! Love, I missed you!"
    I didn't answer him. I looked back at him with a disgusted expression.
    "Darling, what's wrong?"
    I got up slowly, and ran away.

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    Short update sorry!