Eternal Love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Hypnotiq_Trick (01), Aug 20, 2012.

  1. One night, a boy and a girl were driving home after a movie. The boy sensed something was wrong after a long painful silence between them. The girl asked the boy to pull over and said she needed to talk to him. She told him she didn't feel right and the relationship needed to be over. The boy silently nodded and handed her a note and drove her home. Later that night a drunk driver swerved into the boys car killing him instantly. After the news, the girl opened the note and read it. The note read: "I would die without your love."
     
  2. Omg that's cute lol
     
  3. Hehe thanks. I thought it kinda fit my situation
     
  4. OMG almost made me crytht is so sad!! And so truedude i like ur story
     
  5. Share it with others
     
  6. oh my god .. ._.
     
  7. Spread the word bout my story people's!!
     
  8. That's do sad . Really good short story though .  .
     
  9. Ok here's the update people. Hope u like it.

    Aaron and Raine were driving home from a movie date late at night. On the way there, Aaron could sense something was wrong from the long painful silence between them after the date. When he asked Raine, she asked him to pull over and told him she had somethin important to talk about. Raine told Aaron that her friends didn't really like Aaron so the relationship would not really work out. A silent tear fell down his cheek as he listened and handed her a folded note.
    Later that night, a drunk driver swerved and hit Aaron's car as he was on his way home. Aaron died and as he died a single white feather fluttered onto the wreckage.
    After Raine was told the news, she cried hard and decided to open the note to see what was written. The note read: " I would die without your love" and as she read a single white feather landed on her window sill.