Drowning in air, I can't breath anymore. How can I live, When I've hurt another? I'm broken inside, But I can't feel the pain, Life has gone so numb, The heart I broke has left me. Another me remains to haunt me, Watches my every move, So I never get too attached, But life alone is cold and harsh. Still hiding behind the curtains, Of what we could have been, I know one day I will emerge, Alive, and born again. But today I will mourn. For all that could have been. _________________ Working on syntax in English.... What's the verdict?