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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Laura-the-Lomato, Sep 30, 2011.

  1. Drowning in air,
    I can't breath anymore.
    How can I live,
    When I've hurt another?

    I'm broken inside,
    But I can't feel the pain,
    Life has gone so numb,
    The heart I broke has left me.

    Another me remains to haunt me,
    Watches my every move,
    So I never get too attached,
    But life alone is cold and harsh.

    Still hiding behind the curtains,
    Of what we could have been,
    I know one day I will emerge,
    Alive, and born again.

    But today I will mourn.
    For all that could have been.

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    Working on syntax in English.... What's the verdict?
     
  2. Sad but I can empathize
     
  3. Oh, and good!