EmyLies

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Solange-, Sep 5, 2011.

  1. Okay so this is the first story that I am writting so please leave your comment if it's good or bad Thanks! Oh and if there's grammar errors sorry english isn't my first language. -SøL
    ----------------------------------------- Prologue

    "Katrina!" My mom screams my name from upstairs, and when she uses my full name it's never a good sign.

    "Yes?" I ask her innocently. Coming down from the stairs she tells me in a calm voice, "Kat. Just go outside and go annoy someone else instead, will you?!"

    I knew she was mad at me for constantly asking her if she could let me take the drivers liscence test, since you know all 16 year old should get it. But no, of course not, my stuborn of a mother would not let me, not let me too have a bit of liberty of driving anywhere I want. Be free, you know? Is it so wrong too want that? Okay, and maybe just show off my permit, and my future jet black BMW too my friends. So I do as she asks me, I grab my spring dark purple coat from the closet, slip on my new DC skateshoes and go outside slamming the door shut with a bit of anger. I walk towards this stranger, a old man looking in his 60, and yes I did exactly what you're thinking.

    "Hi, I'm Katrina!" I tell him, he turns his head towards me and give me a nice warm smile.

    "Hi Katrina, how ar-" I don't let him finish his sentence and I start annoying this poor man. "I looove the color blue, I love my friends. I love food. I want my drivers liscence but my stuborn ass of a mom doesn't let me. His smile starts too become a frown and his smile slowly vanishes. "I have no idea where my dad is but I don't care I never met him, and I hate school, I hate gym and any kind of sports. Did you know tha-" He didn't let me finish, and with an annoyed look on his face he walks away from me. Yea, I know what you must think right now, she is one crazy girl. I have my reasons, personal reasons actually. I walk back inside the house, take off my shoes and walk upstairs straight too my room closing the door, not bothering too close the door.
     
  2. Tell me if you want me too continu :)
     
  3. Oh and sorry if it's starting slow it will speed up if u want me too continu :)
     
  4. W.e. I'll still continu my passion of writting stories even if no one or even one person is reading it 
     
  5. "Katrina! Come downstairs right away!" I hear a voice telling me tht comming from downstairs. Mom, I thought, what does she want again?! I roll my eyes and answer her back, "One second!" I yell back at her irritated that she wouldn't leave me alone for even a second. "Katrina. Catalina. Eve!" Oh oh, that was even worst when she said my entire name.

    "I'm comming!" I tell ber in an impatient tone.

    Walking down the stairs I winder what I did wrong this time. I stop at the end of the stairs and see mom with a frown and her authority look that makes you sometimes just crawl back somewhere she wouldn't find you. Yes she has tht effect on me sometimes... I'm pretty sure not only me though, sometimes maybe also when she stops people on the road, when she is on duty, for drinking and driving on the same time and they wont admit they did drink. It usually works she says. I give her back a nonchalant look.

    "I want you to go back to that nice man that you annoyed, and tell him you're sorry for your behaviour. Do I make myself clear?!"

    I look outside, from the window and realized be was waitting for the bus at the bus station.

    "Fine. But I only did that because you told me so." I storm out the door with a small discret smirk, at my remark that left her speechless, before slipping on my skateshoes.

    "Hey!" He looks at the way he heard the voice when he realize it's me, the girl who annoyed hik.

    Smilling in a weird way he starts walking the opposite way away from the bus stop, from my house, and into a narrow street.
     
  6. I'm just writting too myself.. Lol 
     
  7. "Wait!" Running to catch up too him, I don't realize where I am but I keep going. I'm few feet away from him and he suddenly stops walking away from and he turns around too face me. A sparkle in his eye that I can't say if it's from annoyment or from anger, he tilts his head sideways and looks at me from head too toe. A crooked smile creeps up to his old face showing some rinkles, he looked like he liked what he sees, it wasn't like the nice warm smile he gave me earlier.

    "You're the one fbat we have been looking for. You'll learn too be more respectful, to be more i telligent, less annoying and more powerful. To be better then you are now and will be better then everyone else."

    "W-What are you talking about?" I stumble on my words, trying too figure out what is happenning right now at the turn of things. He seems too know my secret. My dark little secret. The one no one should know! The one only I should know!
     
  8. Sooooo good can't wait for more
     
  9. "You'll learn too control it too. We all do." At these words other people comes and circles around me, but I can't see their faces because they are wearing dark hoods on them to cover their faces. It was like one of those cheesy wicked horror movies, which I hate horror movies.

    "You're comming with me Katrina Eve." The old man tells me in a low hissing voice, unlike the last time he spoke was calm and kind. It was like he was a whole diffrent person.

    "What if I don't?" I said stubornly not having the intention of going anywhere with them.

    Backing up slowly to make an escape too these strangers and back too my house to tell mom and to make her arrest them for harrasment. I bump in someone while backing up. I turn around too look who I've bumped in, the person I hit seems a bit familiar even though I can not see his face or her face. But I don't know who it is until the person takes his dark hood off too show his face.
     
  10. Ahaha :p Thanks i think it sucks but I'm still keeping it up :)
     
  11. Nah it's awesome
     
  12. Thanks 
     
  13. I let out a little gasp too see it's Salrion Grayson, my best friend. Salrion Grayson. I look at him a bit horrified to find out he is one of these weird people.

    "S-Salrion? G-Grayson?!" Hopping he isn't my best friend and maybe some evil twin of his that he never told me about.

    "Katrina," He responds coldly. With no emotion in her tone, I know it's her. I reconnize his voice anywhere. But what is he doing here?!

    I look around and try too see the other peoples faces when I realize other people I know might be behind those hooded dark cloth. When suddenly they start cloosing in on me.

    "What's going on here?!" I saw in a whisper. My breath is comming out heavily, my heart beatting thumping loudly in my chest. I turn around to face the other people surrounding me, looking for an answer too my question.

    "What do you want from me!?!" I scream towards them. Screamming for my life, screamming so someone, anyone can hear me and help me.

    Waitting a few seconds for them too answer. They keep on cloosing in on me without a word. They all take out there black hooded cloth I see familiar faces around me, everywherr I feel betrayded. But I don't have time too identify each of them because I dash towards a space between them and towards home. But I don't get the chance too reach the end of the narrow street that a stabbing pain in my stomach stops me from taking another step foward. From the corner of my eye I see some shadows flicker like they hve a mind if their own. U lean in to try and ease the pain, holding my stomach. I glance up and look with my eyes to see wbere the hooded people are, they where all around me. I turn my head to try and scan the people with my eyes for Salrion, but another pain in my head makes me let out a cry of pain and suprise, my face twisted with pain I close my eyes, I kneel down on the ground trying too ease my pain. I open my mouth too speak to cry for help, but nothing comes out. The last thing I see is blue eyes staring at me with a sad face, but before I knew if it was her, Charlie, I sink into darkness.

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  14. Yay! Prologue is done :)
     
  15. Omg I'm addicted lol. And nice last name for me I couldn't have done it better myself
     
  16. Haha thanks :) I wasn't sure what name it should be :) So, so far u and Luv2Rok are in it :) Bridget you'll be in it soon too don't worry!
     
  17. I'll try too upgrade it each week or so but for today I'm bummed :p So update is over for today 
     
  18. Awwww tomorrow?
     
  19. woop woop I got a mention xD