This is the first poem i write so please leave your honest opinion and tell me if you want to see more of what's eating me inside. Thanks and please give me your honest opinion! -------------------- Tears dripping from her eyes With the day's make up on her cheeks Arms covered with blood as if that's The last thing she saw. Sitting down on her bed, Starring at her bedroom's walls; Thinking, will he ever call? Or is he gone with it all? Logic is leaving her side Thinking, there is nothing worth living for. Her heart is all over the place, broken in unhealable pieces. Writing a suicide note is the only choise she saw: " i will miss you all, and i will wait for him to come". Next morning she isn't here anymore. All of her worries and heart breaks are over; and she is happy. Shr crossed to the other world, She is done with it all. <\3