Depression of Love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by hawaii216, Oct 12, 2014.

  1. Damn it!
    Why doesn't he see me.Why!?
    Hi,my name is Salsa.This is my story,about two people who can fall in love,they are a good match for each other.But will someone come between them?This guy i loved was kind,humerious,loving,athletic,and best of all,he made me feel good.His name was Slate.I shall nickname him 'Rock' since his name was a beautiful rock. (Not beautiful actually people just wrote on them)But a lover of Slate,Arrianna,plans to tell Slate that she loves her.What will i do?

    Will Salsa end up with Slate?Or will Arrianna?

    This story i am about to tell you is true.
     
  2. I was the new student in December. I was an exchange student from the Mainland.

    It's not easy to make friends,so I became lonely and sad.Until I met him,Slate.He seemes very humourious, kind,athletic,cute,smart,and something just makes him seem well different. Do you believe love at first sight?

    "Hi there."I said with a cheerful voice."Hey."Slate said.As I blushed my reading teacher told me,"You will be Slate's partner."As I blushed I walked over to his desk."Let's get started?" "Yep."

    I didn't like to go to school,but he?He made me feel have a right to go go to school.

    After reading partners,we were now computer partners.
    I liked to laugh at all his jokes,even if they weren't funny.
    I don't like him,I love him.

    5 Months later.....

    "OMG look at Slate!"Arrianna,popular meangirl said.I began to think that she had a crusah on Slate.So I investigated more.

    You know what that meant,asking her.I texted her asking,do u like Slate?

    She replied just ten seconds after I asked her.
    I can't believe it,she...
     
  3. Re: Depression of Love

    Just a bit of helpful advice... Spaces after periods. But great start so far. ?


     
  4. The days went on.

    During our dance practices I heard Arrianna saying,"Ha,look at Slate."

    After school I texted Arrianna, I asked :
    Do you like Slate?
    (Yes,why do you know anyone else who does?)
    I like him.
    (Omg,that is like awesome!)
    Yeah.
    (He's like super cute.)

    My friends told me not to contact her,but I still do. Honestly she doesn't really bother me.

    I wonder what happens if I give him a love note,maybe he will feel the exact same way.

    But what if Arrianna gets jealous?

    Probably not,she dated many many boys.

    But its not like Arrianna and I are gonna end up fighting right?
     
  5. It sounds like my relationship with this guy! omg that is so familar to whats happened to me now its scary •_• i like this guy and hes dating a girl he says hes liked ever since i started liking him