Death Sounds Beautiful

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Bruva, Mar 20, 2019.

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  1. Death sounds beautiful/
    If I can die next to you/
    As time ticks it takes a toll/
    How I urge to be with you/

    Without you, I suffer/
    You're like no other/
    Nmbness smothers/
    I need you, dear lover/

    My whole being yearns/
    My whole soul aches/
    My heart doesn't learn/
    From my mistakes/

    If I could die next to you/
    I would die happily/
    It sounds so wrong/
    But that's just me/

    I wouldn't mind dying/
    Hand in hand right now/
    I promise I'm not lying/
    You give me purpose/

    You give life meaning/
    I'm dependent on your love/
    You're my top priority/
    Nothing else is above/

    Shoot me once or twice/
    You'd still be sweet and nice/
    Please don't twist this/
    Without you I don't wanna exist/

    Give me all your pain/
    You won't be in vain/
    Or crying in the rain/
    With nothing to gain/
     
    #1 Bruva, Mar 20, 2019
  2. *drops stats*

    Ahahaha, kidding, you can't do that anymore.

    But fr. This is pretty rad. ?
     
    #2 Manic, Mar 20, 2019
  3. My 5 y.o nephew writes better poems
     
    #3 TheCatLady, Mar 20, 2019
  4. If you were black, I would feel offended.
     
    #4 Bruva, Mar 20, 2019
  5. Thank you
     
    #5 Bruva, Mar 20, 2019


  6. Thought I would post a poem too ?
     
    #6 Toxy, Mar 20, 2019
  7. lol i saw this post before u edited it red ?
     
    #7 Ghastly, Mar 20, 2019
  8. Roses are red,

    Do roses they bleed?

    I cant really judge this poem































    All because




























    I















    Didn't










    Read.
     
    #8 OFFTOPIC, Mar 20, 2019
  9. Shhhh
     
    #9 Bruva, Mar 20, 2019
  10. Emo
     
    #10 AnimeTiddies, Mar 20, 2019
  11. ?
     
    #11 OFFTOPIC, Mar 20, 2019
  12. Nooooo
     
    #12 Bruva, Mar 22, 2019

  13. Love her writing!!
     
    #13 renamed47423, Mar 22, 2019
  14. Terrible poem
     
    #14 Alicia14, Mar 22, 2019
  15. At first I thought maybe this one would actually be decent but that quickly changed.
     
    #15 Drakaina_, Mar 22, 2019
  16. Nice Jaco! I like it like the writing is nice
    The “without you I don’t wanna exist” part makes me think of overdramatic people who threaten to kill themselves when a relationship they’re in ends
     
    #16 MiaKhaIifa, Mar 22, 2019
  17. Aren't you a lil ray of pitch black today?

    xD keep it up Jaco
     
    #17 lIlIllVash-The-StampedelIlIllI, Mar 22, 2019
  18. Didn't you post a trash ass YouTube link recently? How can you hate on ANYONE after posting that?
     
    #18 Bruva, Mar 23, 2019
  19. Ok. Thank you for your feedback
     
    #19 Bruva, Mar 23, 2019
  20. Oh, I'm not suicidal... but thank you
     
    #20 Bruva, Mar 23, 2019
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