Dead at 15

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -N_G-TheSlenderman, Sep 8, 2011.

  1. It was 4:00PM when the bell ring. I was happy because school was finished and I was free until the morning. I ran to my locker, took my school bag and went out to go home. My house was at 5 minutes of walking from school. Everydays, I was stopping at a cliff to look the nature. But everydays, I was hurry because of those bullies who were always there at 4:05PM. That day, I was a little bit late and, at 4:05PM, they arrived. One of them saw me. He yelled:
    - Hey you! Dumb guy! Yeah you! Get away from here or we'll kick your a**!

    I said:
    - I was just passing. No need to get mad.

    His face became red. He look at his friend and two of them bounced on me. They took my arms so I can't move it. The big guy came near me and said:
    - No one is allowed to speak to me like that! You will pay for it!

    He began to kick me as hard as he can. It was like a tank passing slowly on my body. Suddenly, I heard a big "CRACK". The two guys holding me looked at the forest and let me fall, forgetting I was almost inconscient because of they're leader's punches. I felt. I heard another "CRACK". That time, it was the fence. I was falling off the cliff. I saw me yelling and then, nothing.
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    Bump if you want me to continue my story :) It's my first one so don't be too hard on bad comments please :)
     
  2. Lock this thread plz I lagged and it posted twice