De Nori Aceri De Nori a Person Or a Place Aceri a Place or A fantasy A very Quiet Morning On The Streets Of Ladan,Every House In the neighborhood was quiet except One House. The House Of Nights,Rachel Night Just Got accepted Into Cross Academy and she was filled with excitement . She immediately Picked up The phone and called her Friends Nate And Kayla. "I got accepted Rachel said to her friends,Out of no where Nate Also says I got accepted Too. Now both Kids Were excited But Kayla wast. Rachel Told Nate And Kayla how excited she was to start Cross Academy. The Next Day Rachel Packed Her Stuff For Her First Week. At 9Am The Blue Bus came And picked up all the kids for cross academy. Rachel Was dressed in her White and Black Uniform,As she got on the bus most student weren't wearing The same uniform as her.Rachel Thought she was wearing the wrong uniform , but she noticed that the other student had dark spots around their eyes. Most Of the students were Night Creatures like Rachel but in a human body. As Rachel was walking to her seat a girl named Emberlake invite Rachel to sit by her . Rachel Gladys accepted the offer and sat by Emberlake. As the bus proceed to picking up other students Rachel ask ember "So what's your talent ?" .Ember look at Rachel the outside the window Body Possession she said. When Rachel heard that her eyes widened How do u use your powers Rachel asked ? Well if I'm holding your hand or looking into your eyes I can take over ur body Ember said. Rachel was surprised that a girl her age knew why she was coming her and her powers but her. The last stop the bus made was at Nate's house [Hope You like it Not one if mine strong points writing stories]
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