Creatures Of legends

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Knight, Nov 18, 2012.

  1. Chapter 1: the beginning

    I watched as the soldier passed by, armed with weapon in hand. " all of you are here for a cause and that is you all being creature of legends, the most destructive people in the whole universe." The commander said telling through the speakers. " Creatures of legends?" I asked myself thinking.

    " you all may be wondering what the creatures of legends are right, well how about I explain it, the C.O.L mostly known as Creatures Of Legends are humans who have specials abilities within themselves and as far as we knew none of them existed until now that we were finally able to locate you all 360 C.O.L" he laughed evilly when he said that. At that moment I knew what it meant, I was gonna died without ever being able to apologize to my friend Kat. " No No No No No." I started yelling in frustration.

    " well well it seems like someone wants to say something before getting executed." At that moment exact when he said those words, Anger started to flare up within me as my whole body started to hurt in pain but at the same time it felt good. I lunged forward fast toward him punching him in the stomach. I heard him gasp in surprise just as if he didn't expect me to do anything like this. I made my fist harder and harder as it started to penetrate his stomach making a hole in the middle of his stomach. I moved my hand out and watched as he fell to the floor dead.

    I looked around me and watched as soldiers raised their guns to fire at me. I didn't move but I didn't feel any of the bullets pierce my body, All I felt was indestructible as I stopped the bullets in mid-air and shot them back killing them soldiers. I looked over at the others C.O.L and grinned raising my hand in the air. " we won't let the humans kill us, as today and from now on we will back and kill anyone who gets on our way, This pathetic humans will know what all of us are capable off and we won't let them stand in our way." I yelled out as they raised their hand in the air and cheered with joy.
     
  2. Wow. Love this. Please continue.
     
  3. It's good, just remember a new line for each person speaking and to always use capital letters.