Control

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by ChocolateThunder, Jan 11, 2018.

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  1. I didn't need any excorcist,
    To tell that she's possessive.
    How does she even exist,
    Cause her beauty is excessive.

    Back to the real matter at hand...
    How could I possibly understand,
    Why someone so pretty, had no man?
    When she's so high in demand?

    She seemed so kind around others.
    A smart woman with no brothers.
    From afar, she seemed sophisticated.
    She was thick, but that is unrelated.

    The very first time we got together,
    She made me wish I never met her.
    She always went through my texts.
    The tracking devices came next.

    I couldn't really go anywhere,
    Especially not with her near.
    Once she noticed me stare,
    And hit the girl with a spear.

    It was as if she was Edge,
    And it pushed me to the edge.
    As I stood on a broken ledge,
    She deemed her word supreme.

    Always stalking my social media,
    And appearing like Chlamydia.
    Always asking where I might be,
    And who I might be with as well.

    Her stare could reach my soul.
    She had eyes as black as coal.
    I already knew about her goal.
    That girl only wants to control.
     
  2. S/O to my editor, DragonLily tho. Even though you insulted me and my first rough drafts, it's much appreciated. It would've been tragic without yo help, shorty.
     
  3. Duh, she's always helping you
     
  4. She's always helping everybody tho :/
     
  5. And jeez quit posting your crappy poems in forums pls :/
     
  6. Especially Jacoff though
     
  7. She's contributing to this crap..
     
  8. Are you his daughter?
     
  9. Congrats, James, you've made another joke dat wasn't funny. Why is everyone not surprised. Do the barcode admins kno you spend more time in forums than you do hitting their farms? You can't bother me for hours, but can't hit players bigger than you back?
     
  10. ^Yea preach
     
  11. ChocolateThunder rhymes with blunder
     
  12. How exactly would you know how much I hit my farms scrub? Stop being so nutrient because you can't write poems for shìt
     
  13. If he stalked you good enough,he'd know
     
  14. Nah, he's too focused on writing dog shìt poems for that
     
  15. Another being of no significance who derails threads has commented on my thread.
     
  16. It getting better for the rhyme…but i don't know much about the content, as i am very noob at poems
     
  17. Boo you stink
     
  18. Thanks. Constructive feedback is always welcome. I'm attempting to fix my flaws.
     
  19. Nobody is crying. I don't pick argue ments wit you, so don't pick dem wit me.
     
  20. Idiot tbh
     
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