Cloaked

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by -_I_-4m-G0IN6-7o-CHILL-y0U-__-, Dec 4, 2016.

  1. You were on my mind
    But my thoughts lately are selfish/
    Settle for a text message
    Knowing I want you in my presence/
    I'm an artist with big dreams...
    And you'd find your face in my sketches/
    hooking up with you is expected
    ....Life of the young and reckless/

    Know the difference between wrong and right
    but it's been too long since it felt right/
    Where have you been all my life?
    I've seen some bloody days and cold nights/
    ...These years stolen... I'm a bystander
    Give my testimony through open mics/
    Some blurred lines through my windshield
    Pride mixes well with a cup of ice/

    Cold world... the hottest bartender
    So I flirt with her till the sparks simmer/
    She cuddles me through the harsh winter
    Only warmth I feel... is my heart's cinder/
    You bring light to my deepest secrets
    A new year to my dark December/
    Make it up to you my resolution
    Doubtfulness in my heart's center/

    Apathy in my expressions
    So chic... dressed in depression/
    Ballet... not my profession
    But watch how I dance around your questions/
    ....A Hypnotists deception
    ...An assassin's best weapon/
    ...A stripper's first impression
    ...Every rule has its exception/
     
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  3. pun's cheap replica
     
  4. Love it! Amazingly talented. <3 <3 <3
     
  5. I'll give you props
     
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  7. The irony...
     
  8. Gooooo rs!??
     
  9. All the claps for you 
     
  10. Clap and a half.
     
  11. Omg that’s really really good . Amazingly talented ?
     
  12. This stirred up my emotions a little bit, I can't lie
     
  13. Genuine question: is this a poem or one of them raps that also get posted here?...or both?
     
  14. Rap is poetry put to a hip-hop beat, innit?
     
  15. Eh considering today’s options that could be argued, just nice to know which is which ?
     
  16. Or a trap/house beat or any music but above a certain tempo or

    Idk about today either but keep rap rap and just define new stuff differently.
     
  17. I mean maybe hearing for ex: “Gucci gang” 70 times in a song could be poetic to some people.