civil hell- the unwritten

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by kittehwars, Sep 12, 2011.

  1. Ok, so those who read civil hell all those months ago apparently really liked it, but I didn't, the concept bored me and i disliked all the characters. I found it horribly written and I had reason to end its life.

    What I really wanted you guys to see was a chant I wrote myself for the end of the story when the confederates storm the white house.
    It went a little something like this:

    We're off, we're off, we're off to get killed!
    We're getting filled with lead at our own will!
    We're off, we're off, let the artillery fly Cause we're ready to die!

    I recently came up with a bunch of other cool parts to it, but this is the original.

    Bottom line, I hated the story but I regret cutting it short just because I wanted to show you guys this chant because I love it.

    stay awesome
    the 